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Storm Black




My version of a haiku x-) enjoy soupers!:



Rage brews in her heart
She has no time...she must flee or
Chaos will unfold 

Misery attacks 
In her heart...she prays for mercy
Her lover returns

Gladness strikes her heart
She has no time...she must kiss him 
Love brings her to life

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:06:00 PM
    keeping you in mind as a favorite poet... I'm wondering if you ever wrote the different side of Snow white... "snow black",,, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:04:00 PM
    David,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 5:42:00 PM
    the 2nd haiku...was the part when she gets poisoned by the apple, when in fact that was the good apple out of the bunch...so she feels depressed about the other rotting apples! :)) I can add soooo many twists in this poem. Bleh. haha

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:28:00 PM
    David, I'm here to enjoy a few haiku. Do you know the reason behind some furry unstoppable storms. I like both your KU's... especially the romantic one.. xox~ LINDA

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    Date: 7/9/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! *bow* thank you!
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/9/2012 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yah. the romance part sounded just like SNOW WHITE cept..without the apple! :D
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/9/2012 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No. But I love writing about storms. Do you know the reason behind storms? :P
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/9/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankx! :) I loved your blog. It was great. And your poetry is aaaaamazing. You destroy the poets on here with your awesome poems. That is a compliment. c: I was maning to make the opposite name of Snow White in your last poem. I was gonna write a story about Storm Black (Snow White) You see the contrast?? :)) Have a wonderful day & keep writing cause your good at it. ~ DWB