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Still

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Still

Still
        as a
                summer morn..
a youth
lovelorn..
               the
               veiled dawn..
 a heart
              that mourns..
              a portrait
drawn..
of memories
                time worn..
ambitions
withdrawn..
                a promise
                 forsworn..
an idea
inborn

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:18:00 PM
    Beautifully portrayed Brian, Thank you for sharing your gifts, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:39:00 PM
    This is beautiful, Brian. Love that ending.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 5:17:00 PM
    Beautiful portrait of words as beautiful as your sketches Brian, your a gifted man, V

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 3:55:00 PM
    Wonderful write, I enjoyed this a lot. It's very elegant. Thanks for sharing. -Becca