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The way may be dark

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The way may be dark

O Blissful Beautiful Sun
Pray Light my life all the time
To sparkle with light shall I 
So that your creation shall not be lost

O Moody grey moon
Do shine your lamp in pity
For my tunnel is so dark
May both you and Sun guide my way in life

Parise Pariku

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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 2:22:00 AM
    ooo... awesome... great write,,,:) may the sun and moon's hug and kiss u endlessly...

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:59:00 PM
    this is very nice. Both sun and moon are such an important part of our lives and great objects of poetry!

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:03:00 PM
    with the sun and the moon on your side my girl, you can't go wrong, have a great evening hugs vie

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/6/2012 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Thks so nice of you :)
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:42:00 PM
    A G., ooo I love the entrance of your verse. The ending also has light shining through and through... enjoyed..PD

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 7/6/2012 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thks PD ~~ :)