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My, Oh My Bright Fire

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My, Oh My Bright Fire

Relentless days,
sleepless nights.

Longing-
peace,
never achieved.

Oh-bright Fire.

Never burn out-

Fortitude-
Passion-
Never waiver.

For within,

Relentless days-
Sleepless nights-

Lays a Fire,
brighter than Sun,
purest of Moon's glow.

Oh-bright Fire.

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Inspiration" contest Luis. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Luis

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Luis congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Congrats, Luis. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:21:00 PM

    LUIS... . ;-) Congratulations with the inspirational words you offer through your poem...Thanks once again for supporting my contest.... LUV~ PD

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:35:00 PM

    Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 7/7/2012 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad it was enjoyed
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:32:00 PM

    Nice poem I enjoyed the read today have a great day V

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 7/7/2012 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks I did, hope your have a wonderful week