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SO WARMLY LAID

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SO WARMLY LAID



O Lady, let us not tarry Be thou the rose to spread nights’ glee. Away from jousts, your pearls shalt shine, Spring’s boughs hath me in love, entwined! Knight’s offer then, I giveth fine life Through long winter, the heart a knife; Sayeth yes before looms the war Chivalry tests dark rivers far. O, shouldst thou be fair in season’s rest Time awaits thee, I am the quest. In my thoughts, soft lips ne’er waned So let dusk kiss our moments flamed. For onwards unto fields, thine arms Will endure kingdom’s call of drums; I hear thou sigh, so warmly laid. O, let us thrill our moon, dear maid! ………….. Form: romance : tale of chivalry Medieval Me Contest of Amy Green

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  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:02:00 PM

    very clever

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:48:00 PM

    A wonderfully lovely romance told by an expert. Sure to be a winner in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Nice and romantic piece,dear Nette:-) Have a great day! Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 10:32:00 AM

    excellent write, Nette - wonderful use of ye olde English (a sure big winner)

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Ohhh myyy !! Marvelous writing..Ohh the envy this brings on me !! The wish to be so talented !! Going on my favs !!

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 1:31:00 AM

    This should go a long way in the contest, Nette. I missed it coming down, am glad I went back up.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Never was knight so sensitive and far-searching. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Very nice romantic poem...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest....Marty

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 12:29:00 PM

    A beautiful piece and an excellent entry in the contest. A sure winner in my book.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:22:00 AM

    Very medieval/Shakespearian... Certain to be a winner! Terry (and thanks also for your kind comments)

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:59:00 AM

    I am fine...only poetry is on leave.....

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:57:00 AM

    An excellent poem with a classic touch.Love it Nette!

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 2:53:00 AM

    Yesss!!!