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Soul Serenity

A field of grass
converts into a bed of distress
when I glance at the infinite sky
The clouds sailing like
white ships in the ocean
of the heavens
guided by the blow of the universe
I snap a photo of this beauty
with my eyes and I shut them tight
The image is a seed and
my mind is the soil
In the future, when you want
to start a fire again, I will
close my eyes and stare at the sky
My skin will burn and I will melt
My ashes dissipate into the atmosphere
carried by the wind
but my soul will evaporate
into the promised land
with guidance from the Sun

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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:55:00 AM

    Nice tone and imagery...I can almost "feel" your poem and sense its message. I like the title, too, it almost kind of rolls off the tongue like water.

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Your comments below from Gail is the truth. Write from your heart and have this. Wonderful work. Michael

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:40:00 PM

    nice. I hope to see more from you - JH

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 4:55:00 PM

    Remarkable wow!! Elena you penned pure talent here!! Please write more like these. Hugs, Gail

    De'Orio Avatar Elena De'Orio Date: 7/5/2012 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much! This means a lot.
  1. Date: 7/5/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Oh, I like this...peace and blessings to you.

    De'Orio Avatar Elena De'Orio Date: 7/5/2012 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! xx