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SKELETON TREE

Cracking lifeless limbs.
Casting creepy dark shadows.
Illumined by moon

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  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Hi Marty - Congratulations to you! Like your use of alliteration, and bringing in the imagery of the moon's effect. - Gail

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Congrats! Enjoyed much. Tanya

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Marty, a nice little sweet win, congratulations with hugs~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 3:52:00 PM

    Great job, Marty and congratulations to you as well - Tim

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:49:00 AM

    congrats on your win Marty

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:08:00 AM

    this is a great haiku Marty,congrads on your win!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Marty! Love the last line!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Marty congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this super Haiku!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 5:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Nathan's "Skeleton Tree" contest Marty. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Very nice Marty...so far haven't read a bad one for this contest...judging would super tough I think!!! Good luck.

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:01:00 PM

    An eerie picture, Marty. Me likes!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:23:00 PM

    Marty, wow! good luck in the contest.. always pd

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:16:00 PM

    Very creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner..Good luck with your entry...Thanks for stopping by..I am doing good..It is hot here very hot..It was back 108 again today not figuring in the heat index...Sara

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Marty, great haiku, good luck..David

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Lovely and dark, like this alot. Good luck. Tanya

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Wonderful imagery!Best wishes.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 2:41:00 PM

    The moon has the rare ability to illumine the shadows of trees and night, enjoyed your haiku Marty hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Very imaginative write. :) good luck in the contest! ------Ell