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SUBMARINE'S LOVE

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SUBMARINE'S LOVE

Back in the submarine's love,
Where colorful fishes are singing,
Mr.Sea telling his incredible treasure,
What a bionic love could bring.


The sun in the morn' keep on laughing,
Bringing the joyous tale of life,
Brother Moon gently moving like whispering,
To ensure the night are safe from bite.


Back in the submarine's love,
Where bubbles and peppers are not foe,
Clarity of clouds fill with waterlily dove,
That's where the place I call home...

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Beautifully written poem here Melanie!!! Keep writing!!! Want more!!!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:57:00 AM
    I enjoyed this and I love the phrase you used, "Bionic Love" have a great day love, vie