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Fantastic Reality

What does it mean to keep explanations age-appropriate?
I remember being influenced to hold onto fantasies as reality
Until my reality started to seem like a fantasy
These explanations led me into situations of sensational revelations 
Sweet tasting fantasies disrupted by a bitter aftertaste of reality
Wise young children believing everything they are told 
Lies bewildering and nurturing a fool to unfold 
You crawl before you walk, you walk before you run
You follow before you lead but no leading has been done
I’ve watched and learned that 
But I’ve lived and learned this
My two worlds are mixed but some WILL dismiss either fantasy or reality
Two polar extremes I fluctuate in between
Never a stable mean to lean 
Average seems to evade this perverted scene
A hypocritical fiend scheme
I refuse to birth an additional confused youth as a muse
To persevere the abuse as a pawn
Because I’ve held on and hold onto a fantastic reality that actions and words
Pronouns and verbs
I, We, They, Us
Analyze, Repair, Progress, Maintain
An environment of lives that are never in vain
A reality borne from a fantasy

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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:15:00 AM
    WOW, i am stunned this peice just struck my eye and hit a HOME-RUN..... hi hon how you been? soupmail <3

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:16:00 PM
    on youtube i am troynelson2011 the ocd riddle for world peace, i cant check my email, twitter wont let me tweet, facebook wont let me post, and soundcloud definately owes me an appology..

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Wow somebodies been eating their mental wheaties I really like this

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    Date: 7/5/2012 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aaaaww haha thanks :)
  1. Date: 7/5/2012 7:23:00 AM
    I love the way you convey your words; they are excellently comanded upon this page of life. I too, have experienced in life some of these things... take good care and God bless, much love, Lucinda "Cindy" Lu Cayton

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    Date: 7/5/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Cindy :)
  1. Date: 7/4/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Superb, Not so Insignificant I honestly think this is the best piece or my favorite piece of writing I have ever read on poetry soup. Clean, clear true, concise and very well written. Cheers

    Britt Avatar JustcallMe Britt
    Date: 7/4/2012 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :O WOW! Thank you, Christopher!