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Rain

Sweet condensation!

 You,ve came to rescue me 

Cleanse me and bathe me

wash away this misery 

Will you return me, to the way things used to be? 

Or just desert me, and leave me to my grief

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:33:00 AM

    DONALD, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 9:08:00 PM

    Oh so many griefs. Hope the rain was a blessing. congratulaions. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Donald. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

    Reith Avatar Donald Reith Date: 8/30/2012 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Carol! It was an honor and congrats to all the other winners!