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Real

I question my own existence
Weaned from the breast milk 
of doubt.
Blinded by the sunshine
of my insecurities, I stumble
Helplessly,
I ask for proof
A universal sign of my significance
Am I real?

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  1. Date: 8/4/2012 6:27:00 AM

    Real enough I would say.but what is real.cause just because we can feel emotion doesn't make us real.but what does??? Really enjoyed the poem....leaves me with tons more ??? Tho

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Now thats a question i have asked myself...Am i real? loved it Larry :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Great question, Larry. I would say yes, but then again my family says I'm UNREAL! So how do you tell? Got me? Ralph

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 6:12:00 PM

    your real you just have to work things out.

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 10:02:00 AM

    OH .i have been searching for long to find an answer to this question .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 9:01:00 AM

    yes! keep writing...