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Skeleton tree

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Skeleton tree

Just playing possum
To bloom again come summer
Oh what a show off!

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  1. Date: 1/20/2014 11:37:00 AM

    We await the tricky possum to come back out and play. To show itself to us again, hopfully before May. :) Peace. :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Personally I really liked this one. Keep them coming. I am one of your biggest fans.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You've explained it well.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/21/2012 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Possum pretends to be dead, as your tree is pretending to be dead. I think that is what you are saying.
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Okies next private lesson ;) ;) haiku does not use title because to use a title is like cheating, extra info can be given in a title and the point is to use 17 syllables OR LESS [regarding the 17 & the syllable count in general, it is STILL and always more important to have good content than to have the 'correct syllable count]

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/16/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    just playing possum - I meant just acting as if it's dead(the tree I mean) since it's a cold season but it blooms again.
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/16/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    on this one, you don't show us WHO is playing possum [lol possums actually come out in winter, a possum & a racoon sometimes sleep togther in my outdoor cats igloo! really!] I will assume you mean a flower? [a bearded tulip/rests below the hard snow-- gophers sleep]
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 2:04:00 AM

    New starts in Haiku I am - had to learn some of your Vicky. I like your really well - you're good. - Have a nice new week. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Rich meanings in only three lines! you are a talent really! Love, Omneya

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:20:00 PM

    The Smile starts on first line and widens on the last. Good lines penned here. Michael

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Like this one, very well done, thanks for the nice comment, James

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Loved it!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:44:00 AM

    Three lines having a book of meanings. Loved it.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Enjoyed...BG

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:43:00 PM

    short poem, but tall in meaning... cool. thumbs up! kingfemi.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:49:00 PM

    :) Thx for the smile

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 12:47:00 AM

    Reincarnation arrives in mind for me with this piece - nothing wrong with giving one's gifts - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 4:39:00 PM

    l-o-l!!!

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Nice form of haiku, love your vision.

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 10:17:00 AM

    Great personification here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 3:23:00 AM

    congrats for the deserved win. Deeply dense piece, mutoka jacob

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Very nice Haiku! Congratulations on your win... Terry (& thanks also for your kind comments)

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:22:00 AM

    Excellent! Congratulations, Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Very good. congrats on your win! xo laurel

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:09:00 AM

    Congrats , this was really cute.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:17:00 PM

    lol..this one is really cute. Love it!!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:55:00 PM

    Very cute and congrats! <3 Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Vicky, a nice little sweet win, congratulations with hugs~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 11:48:00 AM

    yes to this , vicky... sweet congrats! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 10:20:00 AM

    I love this Vicky...great haiku....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Vicky, Congrats on your win in the contest...Marty

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:27:00 AM

    Ha!!...you nailed that one Vicky! Many congrats to you as well - Tim

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Vicky congrats on your win..David

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