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At The Edge of a Dream

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At The Edge of a Dream

The sound what a sound
What a rumbling kind of sound
I hear deep-in-the-ground-sound
An earthquaking sound
Coming closer now the sound
Coming, I fear to tell me

Something is falling
From the sky it is falling
For eternity falling
Bright object falling
Faster-now-faster falling
Falling, I fear upon me

This phenomenon is called "Hypnic Jerk" more common among people with sleep disorders and/or the elderly

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  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:22:00 AM

    here is a very interesting one I somehow never saw before. I hope I never dream this one!! They'd call me chicken little. yes, that was my Mustang that I put into the poem, but sadly, the Mustang is long gone. Or maybe you saw my Mitubisi. I traded that one in for the Kia three years ago.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:22:00 AM

    thanks for visiting me on FB. Though Republican, you are sure a sweetheart. hahaha

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Interesting information..Is this the same as restless leg syndrome?...Thanks for stoppiing by my work..Yes, the work was about our trip from our home to the Flint River..First our yard then Potato Creek area that we crossed then the area near and Flint River..Thanks for asking..It was the trip for my husband to see spinal surgeon..Sara

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 7:51:00 AM

    Could be "chicken little" too, she had a hard time with the sky falling as I remember. I never knew about the info in your explanatory line.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 2:18:00 PM

    An excellent piece of poetry you have written and shared with us Tim. I will be back one day soon to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 9:19:00 PM

    good one

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 4:49:00 PM

    A very delightful write you penned about earthquakes Tim. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 4:35:00 PM

    Well stated my friend! Peace and blessings.