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Surprise

If you went to heaven and your worst enemy was there
would you be surprised or filled with fear?
Maybe you would walk out and never return
and end up in the other place.. where you would burn
you just  never know who might be up there
You'd be so filled with love you  wouldn't  even care


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  1. Date: 8/3/2012 7:39:00 PM
    rereading this one. It's one of my favorites of yours.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Joseph , If we get there hate would be washed away,Love the way you summed it up. Well done !!! Anne

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Hopefully there's no room for hate when we reach the other side. I think you wound this up with a great dose of wisdom!

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 7/3/2012 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Elizabeth
  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:18:00 AM
    I heard one theory that when we see the "playback" of ourselves, we will be so mortified seeing our own faults on display, we won't have time to worry or think about others' misdeeds!! Good one, Joseph.

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 7/3/2012 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 7:52:00 PM
    interesting thought Joseph..so lets love everyone and all get to Heavern luv.. that way for sure.. awesome piece of creative poetry ..

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 7/3/2012 8:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda for those kind words
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 7:38:00 PM
    Nigel... that sounds like pork pies so go to a nuclear sub and have a pigs ear and cool down in ding dong bell you can Christmas eve it

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:28:00 PM
    You know I care so much I might just jump into hells flames to escape your fire !