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Tidal Waves and Volcanoes

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Tidal Waves and Volcanoes

Like the flowing rage of magma
it drapes across the land
sweet and sickly smell of sulfur
Making love to noses up high
down low alike
Lake of fire bubbling about and kissing the kingdom
of the frightened, their fiery smiles blossom
A flower 
Singular in its purpose
It buds and pollinates
the rest
Like the flowing rage of water
it sweeps across the land
crisp and clean smell of fresh and new
Tidal waves making love to the land
the noses are full
they come clean in the wash

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:04:00 PM
    what interesting imagery this has, tim. I love that cleansing tidal wash at the end. yours is my last poem for this day! Good night. I'm signing off!!!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 9:21:00 AM
    The magnificent cleansing takes place with such power through your pen. Great imagery Tim; I experience the wonders of these phenomona as I read! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 12:03:00 PM
    nice that you;re back penning, tim... such a defining gift with fabulous tone,impact and imagery... reminds me of when I first read you!...excellent job!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 10:27:00 AM
    lovely picture Tim..both of the dark and light side of Nature and its flow.. creative title too luv.. hope u have been well.. we are at beach for Summer..now..

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:49:00 AM
    Impressive verse, Tim! I could only dream of doing verse like this which I am very inept at...never seems to come out right - Thanks for this poem - Tim

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:31:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this morning..Not sure exactly of what you speak..Something flowing in a rage but not sure what that something could be..Of course, we know that sin and its problems flow like magma...Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara