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Paradise Lost

World

To hide
Feel free

To smile
To cry 

Just to be

No one around
Just me and my thoughts

This is my paradise
But paradise is lost

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:40:00 AM

    So true...it is quite difficult to find this "paradise" in our hectic world, but when we do..........it is bliss !! Congratulations on a thoughtful poem!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:06:00 PM

    Angelika, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:44:00 PM

    awesome piece, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:30:00 PM

    I am reading some mighty fine poems on Brian's winners' list. Congratulations. you deserved a big win.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on a great poem and win, Angelika. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Angelika. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Angelika

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Very nice, Angelika!! Congrats on your deserved first place! Ruben.