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  1. Date: 7/10/2012 10:27:00 PM

    A very moving poem..your pain is speaking loudly!! Bravo!!!

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/10/2012 11:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/7/2012 2:00:00 AM

    nyc write...:)

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/9/2012 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:00:00 AM

    VEry nice poem. I feel your pain!! (just had to say that) but truly, it is a heartfelt write, and I love it.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 8:22:00 AM

    Undoubtedly a sad write, but well expressed. Wishing you well....Yesha.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:47:00 AM

    I like the set up Mad, as if you wanted to show the separation from self, and the words bring us into your story, I would so love to give you a pen name, soup mail.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:07:00 AM

    Mad Hu, pardon me i have to say that again. Friend, pain only uses the cane we give to it either on the giver or on others. It does that at times with fever like a river ... and it could be forever. On-till you say it's over and say stop, pain keeps hopping while we keep hoping and hurting. You just have to set the time. Sellah. Shallom.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/5/2012 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Had Hu, pain only uses the cane that we give to it either on the giver or on others. It does that at times with fever ... On-till you say stop pain keeps hopping while we keep hoping and hurting. You just have to set the time. Thank for you comment on my poem. Shallom.

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 3:11:00 AM

    Yes a gripping write that expresses your feeling.Enjoyed your poem.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/5/2012 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 11:48:00 AM

    incisive take on the angst of life, mad... i reel with you!... stunning!..:) huggs!

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:53:00 AM

    Very gripping write, Mad Hu...I can surely identify with your pain - Tim

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:12:00 AM

    an in depth write.. pertinent quetions prevail.. pain is difficult .. answers illusive.. excellent thoughts Mad Hu..

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:15:00 AM

    Moving poem, nicely done Mad. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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  1. Date: 7/2/2012 1:12:00 AM

    " Blood gives life, But pain takes it away." well said. Sad write. Well penned. tfs

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