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kathleen stevens
Date: 7/10/2012 10:27:00 PM
A very moving poem..your pain is speaking loudly!! Bravo!!!
Mad Hu
Date: 7/10/2012 11:11:00 PM
Thank you:)
rupam goyal
Date: 7/7/2012 2:00:00 AM
nyc write...:)
Mad Hu
Date: 7/9/2012 12:55:00 AM
Thanks:)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2012 10:00:00 AM
VEry nice poem. I feel your pain!! (just had to say that) but truly, it is a heartfelt write, and I love it.
Mad Hu
Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and givg yor comment
Yesha Shah
Date: 7/5/2012 8:22:00 AM
Undoubtedly a sad write, but well expressed. Wishing you well....Yesha.
Mad Hu
Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Yesha:)
Mystic Rose
Date: 7/5/2012 5:47:00 AM
I like the set up Mad, as if you wanted to show the separation from self, and the words bring us into your story, I would so love to give you a pen name, soup mail.
Mad Hu
Date: 7/5/2012 9:20:00 PM
Thank you for yor comments:)
Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 7/5/2012 5:07:00 AM
Mad Hu, pardon me i have to say that again. Friend, pain only uses the cane we give to it either on the giver or on others. It does that at times with fever like a river ... and it could be forever. On-till you say it's over and say stop, pain keeps hopping while we keep hoping and hurting. You just have to set the time. Sellah. Shallom.
Mad Hu
Date: 7/5/2012 9:19:00 PM
Thanks again:)
Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 7/5/2012 4:45:00 AM
Had Hu, pain only uses the cane that we give to it either on the giver or on others. It does that at times with fever ... On-till you say stop pain keeps hopping while we keep hoping and hurting. You just have to set the time. Thank for you comment on my poem. Shallom.
kash poet
Date: 7/5/2012 3:11:00 AM
Yes a gripping write that expresses your feeling.Enjoyed your poem.
Mad Hu
Date: 7/5/2012 3:18:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by and givg your comments:)
nette onclaud
Date: 7/3/2012 11:48:00 AM
incisive take on the angst of life, mad... i reel with you!... stunning!..:) huggs!
Mad Hu
Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
Thanks again for stopping by and givg yor comments
Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/3/2012 6:53:00 AM
Very gripping write, Mad Hu...I can surely identify with your pain - Tim
Mad Hu
Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
Thanks:)
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/3/2012 6:12:00 AM
an in depth write.. pertinent quetions prevail.. pain is difficult .. answers illusive.. excellent thoughts Mad Hu..
Mad Hu
Date: 7/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
Thanks:)
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2012 2:15:00 AM
Moving poem, nicely done Mad. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Mad Hu
Date: 7/2/2012 9:09:00 PM
Thanks Anne for yor comments.
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/2/2012 1:12:00 AM
" Blood gives life, But pain takes it away." well said. Sad write. Well penned. tfs
Mad Hu
Date: 7/2/2012 9:09:00 PM
Thanks again for stopping by,reading and giving yor comments