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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 3:26:00 PM

    This is a truly professional composition of poetic philosophy Scribe - a monumental accomplishment - a superb balance of image, allegory, and wisdom - a must re-read my friend, and a teaching ageless in an ancient garden whence roots are scribes for the temple of flesh - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:39:00 PM

    great write ,,,,, You cannot bailout someone who is morally bankrupt!,,,,,, I do believe this to be true,,,, nice write scribe ;}

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:33:00 AM

    Much of a scribe-like write happening here! Lots to read and ponder, love the last line! A profound write, enjoyed it very much! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Nicely done! Greatly laced with much meaning, i love a work that takes some interpretation!!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 3:05:00 PM

    With the name SCRIBE, some thick philosophical poetry was bound to come out in due time---ta dah! And here it finally is! Congrats on shining as bright as the brightest are standing at the top of the podium with this one! Great work, Mr. those little girls in your photos your granddaughters? Adorable kiddos! I bet u are proud!...gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Hi Scribe congrat on a great win, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 3:56:00 PM

    congrats on ur win

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 11:52:00 AM

    Haven't been on the soup in awhile fam..I love what I'm seeing here...Congrats all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 7/13/2012 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's why I called yo ass....Thanks Fam!
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 5:57:00 AM

    Great analogy, Scribe....LOVE that last line!...Congratulations to you for your win - Tim

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:28:00 AM

    Congrats on your 1st place win! - JH

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 8:17:00 PM

    A different sort of poem, it seems to flow from your heart. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:14:00 PM

    A very interesting piece. Great analogies. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:23:00 PM

    Wonderful and beautiful piece,Scribe...Splendid! congrats on your super win...Love O.A

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 4:42:00 PM

    big congrats on a great write and first place win Scribe luv.. awesome one..

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:47:00 AM

    This one is very unique and deep. Congrats on the well deserved win! Jag

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Reminds me of the Saviors words when he says plant a seed of his word in our hearts. I always enjoy yourmessages.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:10:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work..Great topic and great presentation..Thanks for stopping by....Sara

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem" contest Scribe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Scribe congrats on your win..just excellent...David

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 3:33:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Marlon

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:55:00 PM

    great knowledge in such a wonderfully put together piece,bravo Scribe

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:11:00 PM

    Bravo Boo!! big congrats on your most awsome win!!!:) love the write...hope all is well with you...huggss, love ya, deb

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Marlon, change is difficult, money is good to some.. many of your deep lines are scare me.. it bares nothing but truth ~ congratulations with your awesome win~ Good night~PD

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Hello Marlon, it feels nice to find some time here on the soup tonight... about your poem.. it hits very strong.. I'm glad compassion always set its way as well. for every dark corner there is multiple of 3 around the bins.. always a pleasure ...pd

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 11:20:00 AM

    MOney is the root of evil, this poem is a well delivered message, that needs to be shared for all to see the truth and be grateful for what we have already, instead of being greedy and wanting only what we do not have.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 11:04:00 AM

    Yes indeed Fam!!! I love this too deep!!!!

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Very well written. - It is is the root of all evil... - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 12:25:00 PM

    beautifully twisted with deep meaning, marlon...:) abundance is within!.. hugggs!

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 10:00:00 PM

    What a mind, and I have had the pleasure to read this, have a wonderful evening my dear, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 7:27:00 PM

    Scribe....lovely treatise on modern society! Original...delightful! Jimbo