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Veneration


He steals across the courtyard,
an ardent lover anxious to surprise,
edging ever forward, 
with fiery consummation as his prize.

His blushes blossom bright and hot,
as he lays forth his course and his intent,  
ever nearer to the trellises,
the shadows shrink, now no impediment. 

At his zenith he is seen by all,
the blessed sphere on full display,
inviting those who stand in awe
to pray, and then be on their way.

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:02:00 PM
    A fantastic write on old sol, bringing his gift of warmth for all to bask in. I didn't know till the last verse what this was about and enjoyed the surprise you gave in this.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 2:57:00 PM
    ...just beautiful written Keith - thank you for the sun`s warmth in this poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 7:06:00 PM
    Nothing like a sun rise. My favorite rise and set is at the ocean

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Lovely personification of the Sun? I believe and good sonnet matterial ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Well this is one fire hot write Kieth!! I thank you on behalf of Mikkie for your great comment on the write she did I have only just emailed her, if I write with no one else again I will die happy at least in the respect of being able to have written with her.." yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:31:00 PM
    line 1 is a great opener and the rest of the piece flows from it, keith... sunlight adorns this piece... amazing!..:) huggs!