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Independence

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Independence

Freedom rang across the valley
Battles quiet in a moment of silence
Independence day has given her life purpose
Free to walk without pain
Free to live in harmony
Free to give to others each day
Free to make her house a home
Smiles and laughter flow at liberty
Torture has ended....life with peace began!

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 4:46:00 PM

    So what did she gain independence from? A war? A husband? It could be both!! Very nice, Doris. and thanks for your fun congratulations. I could never get a big head with all the awesome poets I am reading every day!

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 8:41:00 AM

    a great piece but when did peace begin...when we entered a country to fight over oil that doesn't belong to us...yet and still i feel the emotion in this poem and it moves me to say thank you for writing it, as misguided as it may be YOURS IN PEACE, POETRY, PAIN, PROTECTION AND PER CHANCE YOUR PERFECTION....a new phan PHREEPOETREE ~free cee~

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:25:00 AM

    Freedom is the most important thing we have Doris - very well written poem - first class. - Have a lovely weekend Doris. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:21:00 PM

    beautiful insightful write on peace, Doris

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Good one..Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Free to write a beautiful verse! : ) How are you Doris? Enjoy your 4th of July! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 8:49:00 AM

    Freedom is indeed something to be valued, but I'm not sure that torture has ended and that life with peace is quite here. When I hear of the terrible atrocities in Syria and other countries, I can only weep.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 8:44:00 AM

    This is a wonderful write Doris! I really enjoyed this fine poem! Great Work!!