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The Tree of Life

      The tree of life,I climb today,
                  So hard 
                  to climb, 
            Try different ways
                 Life breeze
                  is blowing, 
            It swings,  it sways
                  I hold on 
                     tight,
                I climb,I pray,
                 I wont fall.
                   I have
                      to
                    stay,
          
                       C
                       L   
                       I
                       M
                       B
                       I
                       N
                       G
          
                  for that,
               Victorious day.....

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:23:00 PM

    Tree of life- a historic allusion too. Great creativity here. Loved it. True, feel like climbing this tree. Wish you luck. , Mehnaz.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/2/2013 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much,climb Mehnaz,climb high for 2013
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:57:00 PM

    This is very cool, try climbing from the bottom up. it has an intresting feel "Victorious day for that climbing, stay to I have, I wont fall, I climb, I pray, tight I hold on, it swings it sways, is blowing life breeze, try different ways to climb. So hard the tree of life I climb today,"

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/24/2012 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,crossed my eyes lol,thanks Richard
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:27:00 AM

    yow Richard dis shat dawg an how yuh form it out like a real tree sick!!!! yow mi a invite yuh a mi poetry event fi come perform this when yuh ready bredda just link mi if yh interested zeen!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/13/2012 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yuh see it mi doops,jus trying a bit of creativity,happy yuh luv di vibes,bless up Germaine
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:41:00 AM

    I feel like climbing while reading your awesome poem, Richard. I've almost missed this poem of yours. *I love it and your form is very creative, More power to you always. Thank you for stopping by today leaving an appreciative comment to my poem dedicated to our very dear friend, PD, Have a nice day filled with graces always! :) hugs, leonora

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/7/2012 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much,same to you oxoxox
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 12:12:00 PM

    Narrow is the way to truth and life and if we have faith that surpasses all human knowledge and understanding, we will get to the place of serenity which was lose. I love your poems. love your creativity! take care.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Lide,your comment was heart warming
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 12:36:00 PM

    this is beautiful..love the creativity as well

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Keisha
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:39:00 AM

    wonderful man! great work, am enjoying myself. go for contest. I will post a work on tree of life for in one of my poetry book.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Alfred
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:40:00 PM

    This is just wonderful. DId you put it in to the shape contest? I think it could work there!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/21/2012 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU,NO,GONNA GIVE IT A TRY ANDREA
  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:53:00 PM

    this is awesome, you delivered smiles,peace comfort and joy while i climb with you. Thank you so much Richard :) SK

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/18/2012 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    holding your hand,won't let you fall,thanks SK
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:10:00 AM

    SUCH A BEAUTY MY FRIEND!!!! LOVING IT TO THE MAX!!! Blessings. Joy Wells

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/16/2012 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Joy,loving it too my pretty friend
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 5:08:00 PM

    wow nice write really enjoyed it thanks for sharing

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/11/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Cheryl
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 6:31:00 PM

    love the way it looks like a tree very creative, great write :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/8/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:51:00 PM

    Keep on climbing..loved your write! Much love.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/7/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Aida
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Enjoyed that.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/6/2012 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sherese
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Very inspirational...enjoyed...Marty

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/6/2012 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Marty
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 5:45:00 AM

    This is a great piece creatively penned. Thanks Richard for your visit and comments on my poems. Shallom.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/6/2012 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bless Fisayo,thanks
  1. Date: 7/4/2012 8:13:00 AM

    Great faith in what we read and hope for will help find the goal. Wonderful way to express your faith! :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/5/2012 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Elizabeth
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:26:00 PM

    a day we hope is not far away.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/30/2012 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Situation
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Your poetry gives hope which is what we all need! Very well written!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/30/2012 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Tammy,I try
  1. Date: 6/30/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Only the strong survive... hold on and never look down Victorious days are right around the corner. keep climbing my friend

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/30/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok I will survive then,the strong,thanks Andre
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:41:00 PM

    Greetings Richard! Thanks for visiting my work! I like the feeling of hope this fine poem inspires! Jimbo

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/30/2012 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks James
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 5:10:00 PM

    Nicely done.....hold on tight Richard - well written poem. - Have a lovely weekend. - big hug to my little baby sweetheart. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/29/2012 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Anne Lise,baby sends his oxox
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 8:43:00 AM

    an impression of imagery so fantastic Richard luv.. we climb to the top .. and we arrive at the end of our journey.. absolutely inventive luv.. happy weekend..

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/29/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks the Sweetheart of PS..OXOX
  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:38:00 AM

    Richard you hang on there, you'll get there my friend..David

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/29/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    giving it my best shot,thanks David
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Victory is already yours.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/29/2012 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Beverly
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Sp mail!!! ;)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/28/2012 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Check spm....
    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Powerful image, liked it very much, thnx for the comments, Richard,..:) Jag

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks S J Nair
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Yes, it will be a victorious day, won't it? This is a very powerful and moving write. Glad I had the pleasure of reading it - Tim

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Tim,happy you enjoyed
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 12:09:00 PM

    This is so powerful in words of wisdom my friend. Thanks for commenting also on my poetry. Hugs, Gail

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Gail,thank you for great poetry
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 11:54:00 AM

    This is an awWwwwesome write, richie love it and so000 lively this tree of life.... Xox0

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    still climbing,thanks Carma
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/28/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "SOUP MAIL"