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Daddy

I'm your little bunny
You're so sweet as honey
Your teeth sparkle

*This is a try at a haiku by my 7 year old daughter given to me on father's day. I know the lines are not right, but I think its cool...

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 12:24:00 PM
    ok a more decent comment on your daughter's haiku-- I think it is awesome how she tried, and I like that last line, very vivid if I may say so! I am sure she will write more gems! :D

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 12:23:00 PM
    I think it is adorable! Shucks, I feel bad since you read & leave comments on my poems-i will definitely pass by your latest writes, sorry gotta sleep for now, if I passed by there, I might ramble rubbish. Thank you for your kind words and for making me smile- 'Unikko" ah I believe I have never been called that, does have a nice ring to it, even sounds sorta like Uniqua (don't know how to spell from Backyardigans if you are familiar) ok see rambling!! Read you soon!! Super thanks again Caleb :D!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:49:00 PM
    This is SO cute! I love that she is writing poetry at such a young age. You must be proud!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
    oh yes, I had seen this one before. So cute.

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Daddy, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Great work by your daughter..I hope that this spark will last and she become a great writer..Sara

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:55:00 PM
    I think I see a new talent emerging. She has to be good if she takes after you, Caleb.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:56:00 PM
    sweetly written!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:34:00 PM
    Aww, that is super sweet! Kudos to her!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 10:38:00 AM
    Yes it is cool and sweet Caleb....and only 7 years....well done!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Nice one! Lori