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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:52:00 AM
    Oh wow...David this is a remarkable, and heart wrenching poem. I am taken to that sad place, a field filled of death...a field filled with've read this again and again with more emotion. Well done!

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:21:00 PM
    david, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:17:00 AM
    A good one so close to our remember of our soldiers..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:54:00 PM
    many congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 10:44:00 PM
    So glad to see this on the list. It's one of the best, David. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:59:00 PM
    Well done David. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 1:28:00 PM
    I remember this one - congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 9:43:00 AM
    Congrats on your win David...well deserved.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 9:04:00 AM
    Kuddos on your win, David! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:33:00 PM
    Yes, matching nature with death. I love this kind of symbolism, David. Very nicely portrayed! and I remember poppies being given out around Veteran's day when I was a child. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:23:00 PM
    Such a terrific quatern. The line you repeat really does shift in meaning with each verse. A magnificent tribute to our soldiers.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:30:00 PM
    David - This an incredibly gripping write... Had to read it several times to let it all soak in. Great work! - Tim

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Awesome write! Enjoyed the read! Lori

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Wow, David, you sure have written an incredibly deep write here! I thoroughly enjoyed the vastness of is grasp and the elaborate meaning behind your poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Very moving.. I like the 'form'... nice flow... Like! Terry