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Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/30/2013 10:11:00 PM

Loved reading your work, Nate. A heart wrenching rainbow and a wonderful tribute. ...thank you placing my poem in the winning list of precious moment figurines contest...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/8/2012 9:50:00 AM

To be by God s side is the only consolation for each parent left behind.You misted my eyes.I just posted a poem called santa s sack of weeping crows.. Its about children s death too.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/18/2012 8:45:00 AM

Very touching! I hope you are well! Blessings, Hanitra

Lori Hopkins

Date: 11/6/2012 6:07:00 PM

As a parent it's hard to conceive such a loss. I don't think anyone ever gets over losing a child, only learn to cope. This made me cry.

Leonora Galinta

Date: 10/8/2012 5:40:00 PM

This is very beautiful Nathan. The best dedication poem for them. Thank you for sharing and for my awesome placement in your contest. Forever thanks for everything to you and your family, love and hugs:)) Leonora

James Tate

Date: 10/6/2012 11:27:00 AM

Nate, good poem with feelings. thanks for the space contest poem James

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/6/2012 10:11:00 AM

A very touching write... something to ponder...

Suzette Crous

Date: 7/17/2012 2:48:00 PM

A poem that touches the heart. Wishing on a rainbow....'A rainbow for your to ride.' lost chances to say "I love you". Too many children are lost too soon. Thank you for your thoughtful poem. Love, Suzette

Anamika Nair

Date: 7/10/2012 8:35:00 PM

Wow...this is beautiful and/but incredibly sad. Well written! I am sorry if this is coming from a dark place.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/8/2012 1:14:00 AM

Well Nathan I think you tackled this hard subject very well..wishing you the very best and many thanks from me and Michelle on the great comment..)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2012 10:30:00 PM

just love this one, Nathan. Soupmail.

Gwendolen R.

Date: 6/28/2012 9:01:00 PM

Nathan...a unique idea for a poem and a wonderful dedication...I believe every one of them is just like u wrote,..right by God's side! There was a story on our local news of a toddler who ate a bunch of blood pressure pills of his parent who was outside smoking a cigarette. The child was found dead on the living room floor...My heart sunk so deep to hear of this tragedy...Thanks for the kind appreciation of my little java bean poem..I wrote it as one of my earlier poetry soup poems. It was a passionate write. Great contest! gwendoeln

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2012 3:58:00 PM

This is really wonderful for you to do a poem for these kinds of children. There are far too many of them! And I know PD loves rainbows, so she must have inspired you to include them in the words. Thanks for my placement in your contest. I was very surprised since it was not coffee. Thanks so much for letting us include caffeine beverages as well!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/28/2012 3:16:00 PM

A lovely rainbow ride you have gifted to us. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2012 11:13:00 AM

Sad topic on which you have chosen to write this very good work..It is very sad for a child to die an untimely death..The parents are left with a void that nothing can fill..The good part is heaven awaits the child and the parents can join someday..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2012 7:16:00 PM

Oh wow, Nathan....that dedication hit me in the heart. As you said in your poem....one cound never cry enough to express such pain! Ps....thanks so much for my placement in your coffee challenge!! I'm pleased you liked it!

DON JOHNSON

Date: 6/27/2012 6:17:00 PM

another side of sadness, that touches heart n soul, the pain and emtiness, does not leave us whole:(

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 3:52:00 PM

okay, for my real comment.... Nathan my love.. you know what I think about this poem.. I actually had the honors of reading your poem, before you posted this on the soup.. and you know what makes me smile... LOL... look below me... you actually have 2 + 2 here.. anyways.. you know what I'm saying.... Your heart is in the right place, maybe you should read my poem called "Colors for mothers"... and than see what really needs to be posted in that pretty blog you are talking about... always yours forever PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 3:47:00 PM

Hey Nathan, do you recall the time I had a butterfly contest... lol... and you spammed all my winners with this... Butterfly in the sky~~ I can go twice as high~~ Take a look~~ It's in a book~~ A Reading Rainbow~~ * I can go anywhere~~ Friends to know~~ And ways to grow~~ A Reading Rainbow~~ * I can be anything~~ Take a look~~ It's in a book~~ A Reading Rainbow~~ A Reading Rainbow~~ ***

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/27/2012 3:48:00 PM

lol..i could not help myself.... Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/27/2012 3:47:00 PM

Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT

Date: 6/27/2012 2:53:00 PM

An awesome write here Nathan!! Love the dedication!

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 6/27/2012 11:58:00 AM

Nathan, this is such a beautiful rainbow you displayed here to captivate in a child's eyes. Love it!! Hugs, Gail

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2012 11:35:00 AM

A beautiful rainbow for fun and happiness for all children in heaven. - Nathan, so sweet and gorgeous view - thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Steven Henderson

Date: 6/27/2012 11:17:00 AM

Praise the Almighty fore they have a reserved place in His mansion. Peace and blessings to all!

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