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THE DEATH

The death is not an end
It is a final Exam
Evaluating the whole life
If win
Someone realizes 
The depth of absence
If fail
Just become 
A framed still picture 
On the wall .

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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Thought provoking and final. One to keep in mind. Thanks jk

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:26:00 PM

    Those last three lines are SERIOUSLY DEEP! <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/28/2012 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 11:13:00 PM

    thank you .jk

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:00:00 PM

    In our memories those that have passed on live in our hearts forever, therefore they haven't lived in vain, so much truth here, luv vie

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:15:00 AM

    No one can answer what death is....but maybe you`re right....well written poem jk. - oxox Anne-Lise

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/27/2012 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 4:57:00 AM

    True to core:)

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/27/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you .jk