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The mother that loved me and the one that let me go

You in sorrow let me go oh, love that will not let me go. For we knew not; what now we know oh, love that will not let me go. You, a mother, still a child. I, a child, still a son. You were grown before your time - I was not the only one suckling at your breast. You did your very best. I held you to the test, with bitter years' unrest. Now you wish that you had known the man you now bespeak you are now the mother grown the one, that I did seek. For eighteen years you held me for forty more I wandered faces turned away forlorn time and knowing squandered. Alas, no more, for we have found, as you near then end; more than mother and a son we call each other friend. The years of our estrange surrender as we part for there has been much change in matters of the heart. For the loss we now forgive we let past fall from our grasp, as we embrace the lives we live each other’s hand we clasp.

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 1:23:00 PM

    It doesn't get much better than this. When the human heart is willing to forgive there is much healing to be had. Well expressed John, I am sure your mother was very proud of the man you have become. Your heart is evident in your words.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Beautiful in thought and understanding.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:45:00 AM

    Very nice poem ;}

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Very nicely put John...Your soul is your guide...

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:42:00 PM

    You are a great poet, John. Thank you for stopping by.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:10:00 PM

    This has to be true, how could anyone write like this if it weren't. Such angst and longing in the words that seem to tear the reader apart. You share yourself with such elegance John.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:19:00 PM

    And you have me crying at this one........My three beautiful girls , 22(today) 19 and 16 years old all live with me, but hold me to emotional ransom for the marriage break up. I long for the day we can become friends again... A beautiful show of emotion. Thank you.