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Almost Heaven, West Virginia

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Almost Heaven, West Virginia

majestic mountains
fog hovering in the morn
unsullied waters
hasten to the waterfall
filling the cold deep basin

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  1. Date: 6/27/2012 5:54:00 AM
    Refreshing and beautiful as your tanka

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 9:58:00 PM
    Love how you ended it with the cold deep basin. You did the song title justice!

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 5:52:00 PM
    Those mountains are truly a gift from heaven Victoria. Peace and blessings to you.