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Old Mill Building

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Old Mill Building

vacant building burns
fire reaches up to sky
so hot steel frame melts
old brick structure collapses
people say it's about time

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  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:30:00 AM
    We be sipping on new wine...forgive me i couldn't help myself...peace and blessings Victoria!

    Oliver Avatar Victoria Oliver
    Date: 6/24/2012 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think we all wanted to sip some wine when that building went down - it was arson - I guess someone couldn't wait any longer!