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Carol Sunshine Brown
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America
hand over my heart
my allegiance I pledge...
to America
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/11/2013 9:39:00 PM
Love the Pledge for our country...pd
Maria Paz Samelo
Date: 12/4/2012 2:06:00 AM
nice Senryu my dear friend Carol...so patriotic....thanks for sharing and for your nice comments on my poems.. Hugs!!! :)
Angel Simon
Date: 12/1/2012 7:52:00 AM
patriotic! but over here I will say '' Arise Oh Angel, Nigeria's call obey"... lol... patriotic Carol... Love, Angel
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/30/2012 2:38:00 PM
Nice to read your verse today! Light & Love
Emma Huls
Date: 9/22/2012 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful
lucky okoedion
Date: 8/9/2012 12:58:00 PM
God blesses those who apreciaate that their nation is their's to love. God bless you, God bless great nation America. I Love you carol, i love America.
Ruben O.
Date: 7/6/2012 9:34:00 PM
I was looking into "my fav. poets" and YOU were not there!!!!!! What????? How could it be????? : ) Dont you worry...I already fixed it! Enjoy the honor! ; ) Ruben.
jack horne
Date: 7/5/2012 4:13:00 AM
beautiful patriotic piece, Carol
elizabeth wesley
Date: 7/4/2012 9:06:00 AM
Great way to celebrate July 4! Hope yours is wonderful.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2012 8:47:00 PM
Happy Independence Day, Carol!
Robert Pettit
Date: 7/3/2012 5:09:00 PM
We pledged allegiance at the start of every classroom day years ago in school. Good write just in time for the Fourth of July.
nette onclaud
Date: 7/3/2012 1:48:00 PM
we used to celebrate our independence day every july 4; now it has been changed... so rich in imagery considering brevity of this form, carol.. salute with huggs! :)
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 7/3/2012 10:17:00 AM
wonderful words on this celebration of freedom this week.. u hit the nail on the head Carol ..how precious is freedom ..how blesswed is America.. awesome luv..
Tim B
Date: 7/2/2012 9:33:00 PM
Here here! Independence day is a time to renew pledges and not forget what made this country what it is.
Nathan A.
Date: 7/2/2012 8:41:00 AM
god bless you and god bless america
Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/29/2012 6:56:00 PM
You got me a little misty-eyed reading this, Carol. Yes, God Bless America! - Tim
Marty Owens
Date: 6/29/2012 8:33:00 AM
This is wonderful Carol and thank you for the honor of placing in your Rainbow contest in May...I appreciate it...Marty
David Williams
Date: 6/29/2012 1:36:00 AM
Carol very strong write in a few short words...David
Judy Ball
Date: 6/28/2012 10:54:00 AM
Super Write. Me too. God Bless America. Please read my poem called "Leopard" and "Spots". Does it remind you of anybody? God Bless, JB
john loving iii
Date: 6/27/2012 4:11:00 PM
i don't care who is sitting; I will stand>
jack horne
Date: 6/27/2012 9:31:00 AM
beautiful patriotic write, Carol. Wonderful, as ever, to hear from you, my friend : )
SAKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
Date: 6/26/2012 10:40:00 PM
it is ok not to feel more for your delay in reply email, I am not just spraying words on your poems it is really good . I am working as a police head constable in Tamilnadu state police india dur to my work pressure i was unable to write more you will be taken forward in everything in your life he is watching everyone and actions not to feel sorry be happy and meet everything with happy saktheee
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/26/2012 10:39:00 PM
Short and powerful. Well said. tfs
DON JOHNSON
Date: 6/26/2012 4:47:00 PM
Us cousins down under like her too!
Jancarl Campi
Date: 6/26/2012 11:09:00 AM
Very short, very strong, very to the point. Thanks for showing your love for the USA. It is the best country in the world. Jancarl
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/26/2012 7:17:00 AM
Very patriotic work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sometimes we say the pledge or sing America but don't stop and think what we are saying..Thanks for stopping by..I too am behind with my work at home and my soup but this will catch me up on soup not so easy with at home work..My husband took a week off to help around here but we got very little accomplished..I worked two days and was sick the rest of the time he was off and just had to forced myself to get up and do anything at all...Sara
Laurel Larison
Date: 6/26/2012 6:18:00 AM
wow short and to the point. Its great!
Joann Grisetti
Date: 6/25/2012 5:41:00 PM
Carol, Thanks for stopping by and reading my poems. I really do not expect many comment, I am just glad someone is reading my poems. Please take care of family first, as someday they may have to care for you. I also enjoy reading many other poems.
Black Eyed Susan
Date: 6/25/2012 10:32:00 AM
me too :)
Jonas L. Rozario
Date: 6/24/2012 11:31:00 PM
Very nice Senryu Carol...enjoyed and thank you for all your comments...:)
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