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THE CAVE OF TEARS

She resides in a cave 
Made of her tears 
Only darkness there 
Smell of her tears everywhere 
I lighten the cave and 
Appealed her to get out 
Waiting there , expecting a miracle. 

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 2:07:00 PM

    very well written ,,,,, you have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:17:00 PM

    It be like that. This is a tough situation, JK. Very good one <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/23/2012 8:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:54:00 AM

    If you really want to help get in there sit,listen,encourage,pray and wait for the miracle,nice write Jay

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany Date: 6/23/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks .jk