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The Sweetest Sensation

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The Sweetest Sensation

Passion,staring into lust,
Noses,sharing oxygen.
Our lips connect,
Lips start to stray,
Nibbling ears,kissing necks,
Closely drawn together,
Nipples piercing hairy chest,
Nails sink into back,
Head-board knocking the wall,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Deep moans,skin locked,
We counter attack,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Screams of pleasure,
Waking the whole block,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Nuclear explosion,
Volcano eruption,
AHHHH so hot,so hot,
The sweetest sensation,
 I ever got......

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:34:00 PM

    Wow, I need a cold shower! Awesome write, right in my face, love it and also the other sweetest ones too! Thanks for you nice reviews also! Keep the pen handy, Andrea

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 11/15/2012 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    go get it lol,thanks Andrea.pen and paper always on stand-by lol
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Wow...loved the journey......you know how to write a poetic good time :D - Shaz

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/6/2012 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,thanks Shaz oxox
  1. Date: 9/21/2012 6:02:00 PM

    All I can say is Good Luck Man........Lol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/21/2012 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    got it ,lol,thanks Saleem
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:37:00 AM

    wow : ) that is hot. LUV~Sammie~

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/21/2012 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    see you are falling in love with my poems,keep it up oxoxox nuff luv
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:26:00 PM

    What a sensual piece you have penned! A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done, and thanks for sharing :) ~hugs~ Aimee

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/13/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ,Aimee
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 11:22:00 AM

    let's move the bed away from the wall

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/13/2012 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    AWWWW,and break the ridim,lol,thanks Charlotte
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Hahaha, well described. It's a jaw drop poem.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/7/2012 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    mouth water dripping,lol,thanks Bhavna
  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:20:00 AM

    WOW!!! HOT! HOT! HOT! I LIKE!!! Marty

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/6/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    turn up the heat,thanks Marty
  1. Date: 7/5/2012 12:53:00 PM

    I see what you mean!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 7/5/2012 8:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope you felt the heat,lol,thanks Kathryn
  1. Date: 6/28/2012 4:33:00 AM

    this is interesting, hugs... Chile.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/28/2012 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Chile
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 9:26:00 PM

    Braggart.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/27/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol lol no I am not,but when you got it,you got it thanks Beverly
  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:53:00 AM

    very hut,hut,hut,.......and very imaginative,Ivy

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/26/2012 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    writing is my passion,I love it,thanks Ivy
  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:40:00 AM

    WOW SPECTACULAR IMAGERY DEAR FRIEND.HOT HOT HOT HOT I LIKE IT ALOT!!!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/25/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    burning lol,thanks Elliot
  1. Date: 6/25/2012 10:03:00 AM

    wow...lol don't wake up da block...lol..great poem :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/25/2012 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Twana,I'll try not to,lol
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:55:00 PM

    . Brilliant poetic descriptions of THAT critical seconds from ''your" love moments .Thank you for sharing .jk

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Jay
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:52:00 AM

    nice write

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/23/2012 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Kenisha
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:57:00 AM

    *fans herself feeling faint* "GASP!" my virtue has been compromised reading this lusty pen! thank you for enlightening my senses !

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/23/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope I didnt burn you,lol,thanks Lisa,love your comment
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:59:00 PM

    So that's why there is a little one in your photo.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    maybe,always leave the reader wanting more,lol,thanks Joann
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 4:01:00 PM

    Woooooohaaaaaa!!!!! This is right up there with RATED PG 13 WHEEEWWW EE.... GOT ME ALL HOT N BOTHERED WHY DON'T YA....HEEE... HOTTTTTT; HOTTTTTT!!!!!! This is going in fav s COLD SHOWER NOW PLEASE!!!!! :O hope I haven't upseted you soup fam is here to stay... Xox0 sweet+sour Carma.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/22/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW I BELIEVE THIS WOULD BE UNDER DIMINISHED HEXIVERSE BUT DON't QUOTE ME ON THAT BUT YOU CAN TRY. Lol... Still learning the forms myself hehee....
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:26:00 PM

    Whew, I need a cool shower! Loved it! Tanya

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    full the tub,lol,thanks Tanya
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:24:00 PM

    This is a powerful and sesnous poem! However, I don't think it is didactic. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Matthew,still learning,what is it
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:03:00 PM

    WOW! The sweetest sensation indeed... Great phrasing and imagery... and passion! BRAVO, Richard!! Keith

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Keith,try my best
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Remember to put the pink champagne on cooling........Well done, nice. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Richard.- Have a romantic weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it is,lol,thanks Anne
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Passionate..Thanks for stopping by...Karter thought fast on how to get rid of that green bean..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 6/22/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My daughter had told me that he wouldn't eat them...Sara
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:16:00 PM

    : ) yes indeed, hot stuff for sure, love Elizabeth

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    very hot lol thAnks Elizabeth
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:50:00 PM

    Interesting to say the least...Peace to you.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    peace to you Steven
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Richard I like this, thanks for your comments and I do hope you enter..David

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks David,I will
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Whew!!! This poem is Hot, hot, hot. lol. Very creative Richard. Hugs, Gail

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ice water Gail,lol,thanks
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:28:00 PM

    WHOOOOOOOOOOOOA HAHAHA I couldn't help but to BUST out laughing in the middle of it because you TOOOOTALLY went there. VERY VERY good!! Better than good! <3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/22/2012 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Ravonne,happy you like,honoured by your comment