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Attempts At Haiku - II

I am not the sun
Which your world revolves upon; 
To you, I'm nothing.

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Such classic beauty
As hers aglow that Venus
Would die of envy.

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  1. Date: 6/22/2012 4:17:00 AM

    Perhaps "Successes at Haiku" would be a more appropriate title... nice... Terry

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:35:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing your haiku tonight.