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In mine depths

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In mine depths

Confess I did mine flaw,
of
the blemish kept locked
in mine depths

The austere
yes
the less than 
adorned bearing
of her bloom,
caused tempt beyond
mine bare

In mine depths
wanting thoughts,
attached to mine; 
cold
hard
stare

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 3:21:00 PM
    I think this gets the message across really well James; thank you for the visit, and pleasant comment.."

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Always a pleasure to read your awesome poetry. Hope you both are having a lovely summer. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:17:00 AM
    always thrilled to read a comment from my dear friend James.. and his elegant words of poetry.. revisiting this revelation luv.. enjoying your Summer?

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:46:00 AM
    yes....very deep....good work, James! jmg

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:04:00 PM
    A deep poem ... Very profound James.. I don't know if i shared the news with you..I'm expecting a baby girl,due in September :)

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 7:24:00 AM
    always a brilliant presentation of words James luv.. to enfold the reader in romantic awareness of luv and ecstasy.. u are so gifted.. so real.. my friend..

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 3:48:00 PM
    You've got me thinking with this one James many thoughts / scenes spring in my mind.."

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:02:00 AM
    Revealing...I feel ya, JP! jimbo

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:14:00 PM
    I went to my "FAV. Poets"...and you were not there!! What?? : ) I've already fixed it! Enjoy the honor, dear poet. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 9:54:00 AM
    Well written James. - hug Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Hello, James and to Noah too.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:24:00 AM
    mellow, intriguing tone, james.. so mysteriously lovely..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:25:00 PM
    A poem with depth, James! How is it going for you today?

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:05:00 PM
    Well Done, what lovely emotions

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:36:00 PM
    found trouble getting a grip. and slipped.