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Before and After Love

Living life surrounded by people, yet 
everything feels so empty. I'v never 
felt so alone.
 I go through everyday slowly fading 
away..
 All I want is to be able to say 
tommorrows a new day and I'll 
finally 
be ok.. 
Tommorrow comes and nothings 
ok..
 I'm barly holding on just painfully 
waiting for a brighter day.. I lay 
down at night silently breaking down 
inside, 
so I mend the only way I know how..
 I turn to the bottle cause it never 
lets me down..
 I take a deep breath as the pain 
slowly drowns.. 
I'm giving up on life. 
I just cant find a reason to fight..
 Something keeps me going when 
the 
darkness devours all light.. The only 
thing left that can bring me life and 
it hurts so bad that i just still cant 
be alright..
 All thats left is peices and it makes 
me feel weak.. 
Then just when im falling a hand 
pulls me up..
 My whole world suddenly changed 
in 
everyway.. 
Im finally starting to see everything 
will be ok..
 You took my heart and held it tight..
 Led me out of my darkness and into 
your light.
 I couldnt find feelings to even care, 
then you filled my soul with the love 
we share. 
I dont know where i'd be at today if 
you wernt here to make it all ok..
 Now everymorning I wake up and 
smile.. 
Just  being by your side makes life 
worth while..

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dyna! That's a very pretty name. Love definitely does this. Keep writing and showing who you are through your poetry. I recommend checking out the "Contests: by Members" link they can be both challenging and fun! <3

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Peace and much love for you...May you be blessed!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:34:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup Dyna. - This is a lovely and sweet written poem, like it a lot. You write so well. - Hope you will have fun with poetry, write, read and comments.... - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Very touching, glad you found someone to make you smile : ) love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:06:00 AM

    This is so romantic all the way..beautifully written!! Hope you shared this with your loved one!!