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Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/25/2012 1:21:00 AM
nice,,, congrats on your win,,,, what could be better but ice cream,,, you have a blessed day ;}
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 6/23/2012 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Lisa. Love, Carol
Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/22/2012 3:05:00 PM
Wonderful and gripping...A well deserved win
Carrie Richards
Date: 6/22/2012 8:34:00 AM
As poems of old....this one could be a classic! You are so good with this kind of poetry!! Congratulations!!
kash poet
Date: 6/22/2012 4:59:00 AM
Excellent write Lisa.Congrats on your win!
Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/21/2012 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations!!!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/21/2012 7:30:00 PM
All is fair in love and war, and I love those last lines ending with "ardor evermore sought" Congrats on your win, Lisa.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 6/21/2012 6:04:00 PM
super congrats on first place win Lisa ..
Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/21/2012 5:13:00 PM
Great title, great piece! Splendid language, imagery, cadence and rhyme... Well done, Lisa!! Best wishes, Keith
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/21/2012 2:20:00 PM
The concept of Sheild Mate has always facinated me, I think I'd prefer it to wife! Nice couplets. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
tristen temple
Date: 6/21/2012 1:34:00 PM
..."And they asked Him, 'Shall we call unto the heavens that fire may come to consume them?', but he rebuked them and said, 'Ye know not what manner of Spirit you are.' *.* Hello my dear sweeet beautiful Lisa ... As i read this and many such writes as it; at least in some ways similar; i realize how easy it is in this place and age to be brushed by the wings in gray; manifesting their own mirrors chains, amid the crowds and the darker days ... Smile, cling cling rattle and chang ';' i love your precious beauties fantastic poetry, and i love you too ... Thank you for your priceless hearts pretty visit; always a pleasure, Luv,'' Tristen :)
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/21/2012 11:38:00 AM
,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 10:01:00 AM
...more grief than joy......well written Lisa - oxox Anne-Lise
nette onclaud
Date: 6/20/2012 11:36:00 AM
poignant, wonderful last lines of a well written poem straight from the heart, lisa... :) huggs!
Richard Palmer
Date: 6/19/2012 5:19:00 PM
the death of men for the spoils of war,great write Lisa
Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT
Date: 6/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
Truthful words, I enjoyed this much.....
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/19/2012 12:05:00 PM
Such a shame we have never advanced above warmongering. well done xx
Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
Date: 6/19/2012 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem here..love the flow!!
Steven Henderson
Date: 6/19/2012 10:54:00 AM
Peace and many blessings.