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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 1:21:00 AM

    nice,,, congrats on your win,,,, what could be better but ice cream,,, you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#184" contest Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:05:00 PM

    Wonderful and gripping...A well deserved win

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:34:00 AM

    As poems of old....this one could be a classic! You are so good with this kind of poetry!! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 4:59:00 AM

    Excellent write Lisa.Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 10:52:00 PM

    Congratulations!!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:30:00 PM

    All is fair in love and war, and I love those last lines ending with "ardor evermore sought" Congrats on your win, Lisa.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 6:04:00 PM

    super congrats on first place win Lisa ..

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Great title, great piece! Splendid language, imagery, cadence and rhyme... Well done, Lisa!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:20:00 PM

    The concept of Sheild Mate has always facinated me, I think I'd prefer it to wife! Nice couplets. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:34:00 PM

    ..."And they asked Him, 'Shall we call unto the heavens that fire may come to consume them?', but he rebuked them and said, 'Ye know not what manner of Spirit you are.' *.* Hello my dear sweeet beautiful Lisa ... As i read this and many such writes as it; at least in some ways similar; i realize how easy it is in this place and age to be brushed by the wings in gray; manifesting their own mirrors chains, amid the crowds and the darker days ... Smile, cling cling rattle and chang ';' i love your precious beauties fantastic poetry, and i love you too ... Thank you for your priceless hearts pretty visit; always a pleasure, Luv,'' Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 11:38:00 AM

    ,congratulations with your wonderful win in Brian's contest... Take care pd... ;-)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 10:01:00 AM

    ...more grief than joy......well written Lisa - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:36:00 AM

    poignant, wonderful last lines of a well written poem straight from the heart, lisa... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 5:19:00 PM

    the death of men for the spoils of war,great write Lisa

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Truthful words, I enjoyed this much.....

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Such a shame we have never advanced above warmongering. well done xx

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Beautiful poem here..love the flow!!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Peace and many blessings.