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APPROXIMATELY 60,000 WORDS, FIRST RIGHTS

The beginning, one drop, Small, this novelist’s crop, Perhaps some dialogue or stickman characters, A plot gasping thin air yet a story breaths there. Dripping now, steady, A hero breaks molds, Conflict is building as suspense unfolds, Three chapters finished. Oh, damn the dam! This writer’s block... but then it ebbs, and fresh words spill. Pages fill... At long last the book’s done. Sigh, type: ~The end~ SEND

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  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Dear Cyndi- Unique, alive and oh so true. This one is a winner and doesn't sound like a contest at all. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:53:00 PM

    greeat sequencing of thoughts, cyn.. and this is writer's block??.. hats off, congrats, and huggs!:)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Perfectly plotted!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Cyndi xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:32:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:38:00 AM

    This just flowed, when it was done, I wanted more! CONGRATS!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:38:00 AM

    CYNDI~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Cyndi, the block ended nicely with this, thanks for entering and well done...David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your place in this contest. A very creative poem this is, enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:04:00 AM

    this one was SO clever. I am really enjoying seeing the winner list, all the different ways people chose to do this one. Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 8:22:00 PM

    AWESOME. I think I am seeing a top place winner RIGHT now. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:28:00 AM

    Excellent !!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:59:00 PM

    simple and nice to read .thank you for sharing .jk