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Solar Eclipse

There's something I feel that I still haven't said;
Quotes that haven't straddled my lips.
When poetry wheels don't turn in my head,
Words can cast a solar eclipse.









For Russel Sivey's "Poetry About Poetry" Contest
3rd Place

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:08:00 PM

    I really like this kind of a short poem from you and saying something in a symbolic way. Yes, it was your first poem I had ever seen. It is one of your best, but I think I have seen even better ones of yours. I will let you know when I run across any that I think are your absolute best!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:53:00 PM

    Or make your world feel it's stopped spinning !! Enjoyed the read and wishing you congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:14:00 PM

    congrats :-) SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:52:00 PM

    Great! Four splendid lines... you should continue this verse! Again: great job, JH! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on winning top spot JH xx

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:38:00 PM

    oops, I just looked and saw that this one is from June. So that means you have been here a while. Well, it's good to know who you are now!!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:37:00 PM

    well of course, after what you said, I just had to come and read Solar Eclipse. This is really cool. And wow, it was your first poem since you came here. you have posted many in a short time!! are they all new ones or oldies?

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:55:00 AM

    I like this one alot!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 7:02:00 AM

    cool write....did you see the eclipse? I saw the asteroid on video on the internet. it was cool. they one of the eclipse also.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 5:17:00 AM

    I'm totally with you on this one..an excellent way of expressing it!!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 4:11:00 AM

    Well said J.H. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox Anne-Lise