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  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:01:00 AM

    This is an awesome write, I see a contest inspired it.. Have to say this is like one of those Wow moments when you get to the end.. loved it :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:52:00 PM

    A beautiful testimony, and encounter Scribe - very Brahmin like, but uniquely scibe! I admire the confidence you have in your worth - sometimes the flesh & it's trappings can be repulsive - 'Embers trapped in glass...' is fantastic - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Your writing is unique. Your vocabulary is remarkable. I look forward to reading more of your brillance...it is inspiring.

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Liked the great use of form in this one. Thought provking work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:38:00 PM

    congrats on your win Marlon... .. Joseph

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:35:00 PM

    yes, YOU HIT IT, marlon... congrats and applause!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Scribe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 2:07:00 AM

    Nice take on redemption and purification. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Scribe a very enjoyable read xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:59:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work.Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Mar, this is raw and spirited! Savin' this one for me treasure trove of fav poems....(this is a heavy poem...it might take me a while to drag it to my fav's...here, give me a hand with this...heave, ho!)...Wonderful description of arriving in the promised land! gwendolenvrdu

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:17:00 AM

    The Scribe~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Scribe, I loed this as it is, I saw your comment on a syllable count but I don't know if you changed it or not, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:32:00 AM

    The ending is just beautiful...congrats on your win scribe.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:52:00 AM

    I love this kind of spiritual writing. Good to see you near the top of this winners' list. Big congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning poem Fam!!! Keep burning!!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:38:00 AM

    Yes a powerful write, Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:36:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, :) Jag

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:06:00 AM

    well done!!!! congratulations!!!!! powerful,Boo!! love ya,deb

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    btw...we pronounce FIRE as one syl. and it rhymes with CAR....;-) yup....its on far!! that's why the three wise men wore turnout gear and helmets...they came from a far! ;-) lol
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 3:50:00 AM

    Hmmm...perfect!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 12:23:00 PM

    TRIPHTHONG - 1.5 sillybulls! :P

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's correct. Pronunciation is the key factor!
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:53:00 AM

    Wonderful Hexaverse !Enjoyed.(pl.check the syll.count of 5th line:)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.....but the syllable count is right. The word is a 2 syllable word, that can be argued as a single syllable word!
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:40:00 AM

    This is a beauty...I could smell the incense and feel that fire! I love this poem of yours... :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:25:00 AM

    sorry about the syllable thing, Marlon, it's just the way I was taught. Beautiful poem. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:41:00 AM

    Well written for the contest, wish you luck and hope for a win for you. Have a lovely new week. - oxox huggggs Anne-Lise

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:26:00 AM

    Oooops! I meant: too weird for me. For me! Each to their own! One love.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:25:00 AM

    Oh yeah, this has you written all over it! Sheesh, you totally out-maneuvered my own entry for David's contest. This is easily one of my favourite poems of yours. I just saw your latest comment on my blog....dun worry, I don't swing that way either lol. I love you as a brother, and not like a wife. That would be too weird :D

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks....lok
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 12:00:00 AM

    I love this poem. you have a great talent. bless you!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/18/2012 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 10:11:00 PM

    SMASHING!!!SOOOO MUCH SOUL. SUPREME IN FACT!!!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/17/2012 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks E.B.
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Yikes!!!!!!! You are wrong fam..super wrong!!! Excellent excellent excellent!!! A winner for sure!!..right on the dot!!!..beautifully done!!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 6/17/2012 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol thanks.....just trying it out!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Had to come back and read me a bedtime story!!! Lol
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