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  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:01:00 AM
    This is an awesome write, I see a contest inspired it.. Have to say this is like one of those Wow moments when you get to the end.. loved it :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:52:00 PM
    A beautiful testimony, and encounter Scribe - very Brahmin like, but uniquely scibe! I admire the confidence you have in your worth - sometimes the flesh & it's trappings can be repulsive - 'Embers trapped in glass...' is fantastic - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Your writing is unique. Your vocabulary is remarkable. I look forward to reading more of your is inspiring.

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Liked the great use of form in this one. Thought provking work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:38:00 PM
    congrats on your win Marlon... .. Joseph

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:35:00 PM
    yes, YOU HIT IT, marlon... congrats and applause!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Scribe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 2:07:00 AM
    Nice take on redemption and purification. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Scribe a very enjoyable read xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:59:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work.Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Mar, this is raw and spirited! Savin' this one for me treasure trove of fav poems....(this is a heavy might take me a while to drag it to my fav', give me a hand with this...heave, ho!)...Wonderful description of arriving in the promised land! gwendolenvrdu

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:17:00 AM
    The Scribe~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Scribe, I loed this as it is, I saw your comment on a syllable count but I don't know if you changed it or not, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:32:00 AM
    The ending is just beautiful...congrats on your win scribe.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:52:00 AM
    I love this kind of spiritual writing. Good to see you near the top of this winners' list. Big congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning poem Fam!!! Keep burning!!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:38:00 AM
    Yes a powerful write, Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, :) Jag

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:06:00 AM
    well done!!!! congratulations!!!!! powerful,Boo!! love ya,deb

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/22/2012 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    btw...we pronounce FIRE as one syl. and it rhymes with CAR....;-) yup....its on far!! that's why the three wise men wore turnout gear and helmets...they came from a far! ;-) lol
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 3:50:00 AM