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My Candle- Light Shines On You

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My Candle- Light Shines On You

                           An
                       Internal~
                    Flame Flicks
                    During Every
                     Break You,
                       Breathe.
               For Your Words Are
             Not Callous, But Chary
             And STUNNING To Me..
            With~Out This LIGHT Of
            Fire That Burns Through,
         Your Eyes: LIFE Would Have
         "NO MEANING" Above Mine...
           So I Ask Keep This Flame 
             Alive For It Will "NEVER" 
         Skip A Beat, As I Shall COM~
         Ply To Your Every COMMAND 
         Of TRUTH; Where My Candle~ 
 Light Burns BRIGHT, Just For YOU Among 
 Poetry N' Our  Love..Ever~Lasting TRIBUTE
                  That    " IMPRINTS "
                     US ALWAyS!!!!



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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 4:57:00 AM

    Quite a poem!! Keep writing.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 AM

    WHOOOOOOOA!!! Carma, you are such a sweetheart! Ooooooh, okay it all makes since now. Your name must be Sweetheart "Forever*Lust" Carma <3

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/18/2012 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so000 much britt, now only if I could have him for real, but forever*lust it must be... And I know I have his heart in my dreams!!! As mine are in his.... Xox0 Carma
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Oh wow Carma!!! This is an excellent piece of art here..indeed original!!! You are doing real good with this..loving it!! Regards..INK-U-SCRIPT

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ps: Single Red Rose Was Wrote For You Too!! I slipt up and hit summit before I could dedicate it!!
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YOU ARE SO MOST CERTAINLY WELCOME SWEETHEART, I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF ABOUT LIFE IN GENERAL As well... I Think I have read just about every one of yours and can't wait to see what's in store next write....
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Thanks PG,*INK* I meant every word I said in this piece, though it was a challenge to get it just right... Very proud of the work of art I think it's right at the top with DRUNKEN MASTER And RATED PG-13... Love always Carma" muah!!!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/17/2012 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for all your tributes to me!! Never had this experience before..this is truly the first..Thank you for not being afraid to express your feelings.!!
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Love it...love it....love it..........Super tribute!!! - Have a beautiful Sunday Carma! - oxox Anne-Lise

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "thank you Anne-Lise, took me three hours to get it right.. Glad you enjoyed this shape. Xox0 Carma"
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 4:22:00 AM

    You are soooo dreamy and enchanting!!! MAGNIFICENT WRITE!!!! I am sure he will smile ear to ear, when he takes gander at this splendor!!!!

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ....and it did!!!!
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 6/17/2012 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Aaaaahhhhhh.... Elliot my heart just melted away!!! thank you so000 kindly for A delightful, response... You made my morning; and I'm sure he will;as it will go straight to the lock box! Xox0 Carma"