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Gone

Animals all gone.
Hope has left this place as well.
Not a thing stirring.

It's nothing. Nada.
Not a light in city.
There is no city.

What is the cause of
this this terrible disaster?
One. Stupid. Mistake

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 7:41:00 AM

    terrifying what can happen in a second or two.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:49:00 AM

    Great gesture in your pen her Jacob

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Hello Jacob, where have you been? I am looking forward for your next poetry :D

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Jacob. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:51:00 PM

    Good story telling!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:35:00 AM

    Congrats to you, Jacob. I had seen this one before and am thinking it's a type of nuclear disaster or something.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your win Jaccob, hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Jacob, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 6:59:00 AM

    A unique write especially your ending :) enjoyed it Jacob! tc Wilma

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 12:28:00 PM

    A dooms day poem with such an empty feeling. Are we waiting now for one?

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:02:00 AM

    A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jacob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 2:46:00 AM

    Nicely done here Jacob!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Very well written Jacob....like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 12:37:00 AM

    This is a fascinating write, Jacob. WAs it for the contest on the end of the world?

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:26:00 PM

    Wow...love this...I like what you did with the last line..BG