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Crown of My Body-My Toes

twinkle toes

gives breath to dreams

sparking hope

for life’s card game

romance soars

under table

of destiny’s greatest feast

wiggling toes

plant happy home

berthing goals

erasing pain

giggling and 

wrapping ourselves

in a dream of shooting stars

For Nette's Contest-Crown of My Body-Whitney Form

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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 8:36:00 PM

    Rix, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 10:03:00 PM

    Oh!!! Toes? Yummy-Yummy! : ) Belated congratulations on your win, Gwendolen! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Gwen, congrats on your win with your wiggly toes! Love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 2:24:00 AM

    Gwen, congrats on another great win..David

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Nice to see you again on a winners' list. big congrast , my friend. (toes was so unique to do!)

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 12:47:00 PM

    'twinkle toes' - definitely reminds me of stars. It's unique how you've tied toes to dreams...fascinating. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Congratulations Gwen on your win! Thanks for the inspiration.See that poem won a first place.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 10:43:00 PM

    adorable entry, congrats on your win Gwen

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 8:16:00 PM

    A perky little toe jingle. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's "Crown" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 5:07:00 PM

    Oh, what a delightful poem, Gwen!! Who could make magic about a poem that's about toes, except for you?? Love it!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:20:00 PM

    Just returning to this one . It's so cute, Gwen!! And yes, a good documentary lives forever. Remember the old Disney ones on animals (well, maybe you don't. they made them in the 60's a lot)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 8:43:00 AM

    This is so cute Gwen.A beautiful poem for Nette's contest.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Enjoyed your Crown, nicely penned and best of luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:36:00 PM

    I bet you had the sweetest little pink baby toes!!! Thanks for always leaving me such nice comments its easy to help others when one feels so apreciated by fine friends like you and Yasmin & many others. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Whitney? I should google this form! Your toes sound yummy! LOL! Interesting "ode" to this part of our body...usually not highly considered in poetry. Best of luck in the contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Dont dirty your toes digging holes in the garden dirt, luv, jag

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:52:00 PM

    I love to go barefoot Thanks for sharing your great ode to toes.

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

    This is cute, Gwendolen.:) Playing footsie with those twinkling toes sounds like fun! Enjoyed this write, makes me smiley! Best wishes Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 10:30:00 AM

    this is quite the write Gwen.. do hope those toes are twinkling now as u feel better luv.. we all deal with some malady in life .. so thankful for our poeticd gift to express .. please feel better luv.. good luck in contest too..

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 10:30:00 AM

    am actually commuting between both sites at the moment.. WN and PS.. like both so much luv.. prayers for u friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Good morning Rix, stopping by to wish you the best this Fathers Day, day.... Here my Sunday, has a beautiful start.. My toes are the connection to everything I do, and everything I am... Thanks God we have each other.. Now..shhhh! My toes are talking secrets again..I wonder what adventure they have store for me today....Good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 2:47:00 AM

    Hi Gwen :D That's so cool of you to write about your toes :D Really enjoyed this one and of how you made it so happy, especially with the twinkling and wiggling toes! I hope all is well with you and thanks for your comments in my Favorite Devonshire post- it was my pleasure to join you on that! Hugs to you!! :D

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 12:16:00 AM

    oh, Gwen, this is so funny to me to choose toes!!But you did it perfectly!! gosh, my toes are about my worst attribute. and my fingernails that I bite off. hahaha.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:28:00 PM

    I think this is adorable and clever. Made me smile. BG

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:06:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this grand display of footsies! You gave everything wonderful about toes, I love it! Thanks for the happiness of a grandiose write Gwendolen! Awesome poem my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 8:00:00 PM

    Love this Whitney form of yours here G..good luck in the contest...this is definitely a winner!!