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Fairy Diary: Day 11-- A Picnic

Fairy Diary: Day 11-- A Picnic

When Lolly, Gag, and Lint
Went to a pic-a-nic
They hid behind a tree
And ate the peppermint!
The capers made Gag sick...
Or maybe 'twas the brie!

Everything was grand!
At least I thought so.
Lint got in the jam
And would not let go
(We lent Lint a hand).

Rain soon started.
Biscuits got wet...
Broken hearted?
Oh no! Not yet!

'Till Lolly
Ate them all
up--soggy!

Gag and
Lint, then

Went!

6/15/2012©

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  1. Date: 6/26/2012 2:18:00 AM

    Your ending was hilarious. Loved this and see why it made the winners list. Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:36:00 PM

    love the way this ended, deborah.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:36:00 AM

    I'm giggling! You do seem to have that affect on me! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Debs, you are so funny xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Yowza---you mystical writer, YOU!...How quaint and imaginative, Debs....You wrote so well for this contest of David's...Congrats girl! gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Hi, Deb~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Congrats on tour medal, poet! Good piece!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Cap'n Deb, what can I say?.. just excellent..thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:00:00 AM

    This is so cute and whimsical. Congrats on your win, Deborah! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Nice humor & rhyming Deborah...well deserved win for you!!! Many congrats!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thank you deat Jonas...
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:52:00 AM

    oh yes, I sure remember THIS playful one. One of my favorites in the contest. Congrats on your big win.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you again my dear friend!! :-)
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning poem Deborah!!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks G :-)
  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:38:00 AM

    :) That was so sweet, Congrats!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you dear Yesha!!
  1. Date: 6/21/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Cute..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/22/2012 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara!! hope you are well...love ya...:-)
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:37:00 PM

    hahaha. What cute playing on words and clever idea for this to be a fairy diary. A unique entry in the contest!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/19/2012 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thank you so much Andrea...:)
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:53:00 PM

    Deb, enjoyed..xox~pd

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/19/2012 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks sweet pd!! :)
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:31:00 PM

    Ha Ha, I just love the humor of your write! This is a perfectly rhymed poem Deborah! I really enjoyed the elaborately expressed write you have written! This is a spectacular poem my friend! Great work!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 6/16/2012 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) lol thank you dear Russell...you are sooo kind to me...thanks for cheering my day....love ya, deb