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These clouds, surrounding my space

As these clouds keep surrounding, my space
I keep walking
Until, I've fallen to deep
Hoping and praying
I have a reachable hand
A ladder, some way up

I wish drum-fires, thunder-cracks and twisters
Would leave me alone
I wish my roses
Had no thorns, as they leave me bleeding
In so many places

I try to rinse off
Deep, deep in the ocean
Rinsing all these scars
I keep collecting, day by day

As, I lift up a voice and caterwaul
Take away my fever
Stop letting me, tumble
Stop receiving my blood
Each and every way I fight
Causing me to lose, my field of vision

Deep in these clouds
These clouds, surrounding my space
My only space

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:19:00 AM

    ..."Sounds Like Love, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Delilah * Dripping From Petals Dipped In Burning Red Flames Of Scorching Emotions Entangling Ones Heart Amid These Thorns Reaching From The Stems In 'Desires Burning Bed Of Sweeet Love ...Luv,'" Tristen :)

     Avatar Date: 6/16/2012 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * . . "PURE BEAUTY" . . *
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:08:00 AM

    nice write