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Her Beating Heart

A heart so big
She couldn’t help herself
She’d give and she’d give
Just couldn’t help herself
Just couldn’t say no
Never seen the reason why
It never hurt to give
It only hurt to be stolen from
Toys that were given to her where stolen
Clothes that were bought for her were stolen
Relationships given to her were stolen
Privacy given to her were stolen
But when these people asked for something she had
She’d never say no
“I need you to give them your signature so we can withdraw all of the money from your bank”
Sure she’d ask why but she never said no
“I’m your mother; I’ll pay you back!”
Because that was her mother she couldn’t say no
A brother she’s lived with until he was kicked out for the final time 
His loving kinship reminisced by her in pictures of her as baby
Her first dog given away in a bout of her mother’s selfish anger
With a heart so big deceit was consistently persistent
Her first boyfriend would ask and ask and she’d finally give in
Because he said he loved her  
“Even after I graduate high school, we will still be together”
He graduated high school and they are no longer together
Her first diary once used as a method of venting had to be hidden from this place to that place
In an attempt for freedom of thought after she found an ill willed message from a subscriber unbeknownst to her named, Mom
Money would go missing so she hid that from place to place and then one day it was burning in a lamp
Once she seen her brother putting his belongings in a garbage bag
She cried, went for her stash and gave him her last – it was a little over sixty dollars
This girl knows no karma but her heart continues to beat
She gave most of her heart to the people of the planet
Now she dreams to be one with the planet where she will give the last of her beating heart

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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 10:05:00 PM
    Again, a lot of forlorn thoughts going on in these lines, but the overall hope and dreams are wot makes life worth it. This is bleeding heart poetry. I truly respect the emotions that you evoke through your lines. I kid around, and sometimes purposefully write stupid, silly stuff, but in the end, emotive poetry is where it's at!

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    Date: 6/18/2012 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your poetry, Chris, is smurfectly smurfing fine. I absolutely adore it! lol I enjoy the way it makes me feel. You are versatile in your work touching ALL aspects of EVERYTHING! A look inside your mind through your poetry... the things it does to me
  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:28:00 PM
    ..."Torn, Used & Abused Yet To Rise Above It All & Never Broken, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Brittany * Precious Is The Heart That Bleeds, Priceless Is The Spirit Which Needs *.* 'Very Beautiful, Just Like You ... Luv,'" Tristen :)

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Waw. this is the 1st of yours I have read and this is stunning Brittany. "Her beating heart", is the perfect title to such an excellent piece.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 4:58:00 PM
    EPIC!!! BRAVO!!! BRAVO !!!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:26:00 PM
    A diamond in the rough that is what you are my precious, no amount of tumble drying can take away your light, lest the one who made you comes to take, then my dear, he will form you like the stars of heaven, to shine eternal light, my love and my peace go with you, and thank you for sharing your heart, Vienna.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Hi Brittany; What can I say about this poem. It is touching and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:53:00 AM
    be one and be in peace,great write Brittany

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:50:00 AM
    Dang Brittany...too emotional for me! excellent write here..is this you?

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:41:00 AM
    "OMG!!! BRitt, this is deep and left me teary so intense with emotions here loved every true word about this one... Love Carma"