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On Love's Suicide

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On Love's Suicide

Today you broke me; and
left my heart bleeding on,
love's suicide.

The pain, stabs your sword
right through this scare: so
deep, seeping out.

Only questions our faith of
true meaning..... Was it
really there in the first
place? I ask;

Or was I only dreaming
In the first degree, can
you bare these tear drops
on your guitar to wipe them
clean.

Come back to me, don't leave 
me here drunk on love's suicide 
I beg of you... My love!!!

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:25:00 AM
    very strong title, i love how u express the pain and willingness to stil get back to that love. This is wonderful.*smiles* RON

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/16/2012 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Thank You RoNny, yes it indeed was strong and painful.. was having a ruff day! But relief is all about wrighting right? Thanks for the comment...
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 8:40:00 AM
    praying for your happiness to return,nice write Carma

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/15/2012 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "thank you Richard, for the warm prayer...xoxo!!! Carma"
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 11:28:00 PM
    Very intense write Carma...love it!!

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/15/2012 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Thank You Sweetheart Was Feeling Kinda Down Today, But I'm Better Now..Love Carma" :)
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:26:00 PM
    Give praise to the Creator. You left me tearing. Be blessed and peace be with you.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/14/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the praises, I always try to keep my head held high.... God bless you! Carma
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:24:00 PM
    this is really good, i feel like this often, carma, and beautiful name, by the way! anyways, love it! thanks for sharing, =Juli-Michelle

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/14/2012 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Julie-Michelle, and for the comment on my name, but it feels sometimes as if I'm cursed lol.... Glad you enjoyed it! Carma