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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:31:00 AM
    great story from the kid's point of view. Shades of Shel Silverstein in there! loved it.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:40:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Very cute. :D

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:57:00 PM
    one of my fave entries, gwenie... when will you publish children's books?... so playful yet deep in terms of how younsters really express their moods!.. congrats with hugggs!..:)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:58:00 AM
    Unique piece from a unique Lady.Great job,Gwen. Congratulations on your win....Ride on,Friend...OXOX...

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:51:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:00:00 AM
    Toddlers and their rights? Ha ha ha! But there is nothing funny about eating peas(but don't tell the kids). Nice poem Gwen and congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Gwen my boys hated peas too xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:39:00 AM
    RIX~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Gwen put that finger food away, loved this, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:07:00 AM
    Yours was so adorable!! Congrats to you, sweetie!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:26:00 PM
    "Mutiny on the brig" those wonderful small beings with set ideas and strong lungs...sometimes so hard to resist! A fun write, Gwendolen...good luck with the contest! Best wishes, Mikki :) Oh...I had had a poem posted to accompany Joe's, now I will write another! God bless Joe for his patience!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 2:49:00 AM
    This is another witty and fun write from you, Gwen :D-- it sure would be an interesting scene if this were to happen :) enjoy your weekend and love to you :D

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:50:00 PM
    How beautiful. Surely a winner in the contest. Thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Lonely. I admire your deep insight.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:54:00 PM
    Great topic that you have chosen..Good job..Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I have enjoyed poetry since I was a child but there have been delays and obstacles along the way to prevent my reading and writing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
    LOL, love this fun piece, Gwendolen. Hope Gabriella had - or has - a great day. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:32:00 PM
    WOW!!Does that K stand for Me?Good suggestion by jaggy (below).

    poet Avatar kash poet
    Date: 6/16/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't know:( Trainer is needed:)
    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 6/15/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When I revise this version I will add you in at the end...."NOT!" hahahahh....The heat is getting to YOU TOO! You , Jag, and Yasmin need to go swimming!
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM it..brings back memories..good luck in the contest!! hugs

    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 6/15/2012 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your first win this past week too!!!