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A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge

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A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge


Not those green things again 

Mom!  Really ?  They are gross !

I’m going on a strike!

Starting right now!  No PEAS !

A real live hunger strike !

No MORE FINGER FOODS, PLEASE ?   


You eat them!  Will ya ?

Let’s put on YOUR  bib !

Ridiculous, huh ?

Now look who’s a clown !?

See YOUR ugly frown ?


Give me a fork !

Stainless steel too

Barbequed pork

OR WE ARE THRU !


Toddler’s rights

This highchair

Bites!  You  try

it out !

RIGHT NOW !

 K?



FOR PD's Gerber Baby Picture
INSPIRED BY 16 yr old photo of Gabriella at mealtime! Thank goodness for nannies!!!
	
        

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:31:00 AM

    great story from the kid's point of view. Shades of Shel Silverstein in there! loved it.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:40:00 PM

    cute

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 4:39:00 PM

    Very cute. :D

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:57:00 PM

    one of my fave entries, gwenie... when will you publish children's books?... so playful yet deep in terms of how younsters really express their moods!.. congrats with hugggs!..:)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Unique piece from a unique Lady.Great job,Gwen. Congratulations on your win....Ride on,Friend...OXOX...

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:51:00 AM

    soupmail.

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 3:00:00 AM

    Toddlers and their rights? Ha ha ha! But there is nothing funny about eating peas(but don't tell the kids). Nice poem Gwen and congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Gwen my boys hated peas too xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:39:00 AM

    RIX~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Gwen put that finger food away, loved this, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:07:00 AM

    Yours was so adorable!! Congrats to you, sweetie!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 7:26:00 PM

    "Mutiny on the brig" those wonderful small beings with set ideas and strong lungs...sometimes so hard to resist! A fun write, Gwendolen...good luck with the contest! Best wishes, Mikki :) Oh...I had had a poem posted to accompany Joe's, now I will write another! God bless Joe for his patience!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 2:49:00 AM

    This is another witty and fun write from you, Gwen :D-- it sure would be an interesting scene if this were to happen :) enjoy your weekend and love to you :D

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:50:00 PM

    How beautiful. Surely a winner in the contest. Thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Lonely. I admire your deep insight.

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 4:54:00 PM

    Great topic that you have chosen..Good job..Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I have enjoyed poetry since I was a child but there have been delays and obstacles along the way to prevent my reading and writing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 11:48:00 AM

    LOL, love this fun piece, Gwendolen. Hope Gabriella had - or has - a great day. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:32:00 PM

    WOW!!Does that K stand for Me?Good suggestion by jaggy (below).

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 6/16/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't know:( Trainer is needed:)
    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When I revise this version I will add you in at the end...."NOT!" hahahahh....The heat is getting to YOU TOO! You , Jag, and Yasmin need to go swimming!
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM

    lol..love it..brings back memories..good luck in the contest!! hugs

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your first win this past week too!!!
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 8:16:00 AM

    hahaha, that was funny, the little K at the end. GOOD way to do the contest, sweetie.

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's called revenge poetry.....
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 5:31:00 AM

    It gladdens me to read this one dealing with a lil something from our daily life..Not everyone could handle such topics as deftly as you have done here, that too after shifting gears so smoothly from lofty things like the holocaust which again is another impossibility for many of the less talented ones.. simply great , Gwen..:) Jag ps: About your creativity going dry, i would suggest you write a love note to someone u like which would help to open up those blocked lines.

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The Indian heat wave has attacked your poor brain, Jaggy! hahaha....Thanks for your kindest remarks...
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 1:43:00 AM

    LOL,WONDERFUL POEM!!! I don't think you need winning wishes or luck for this one!!! It reads like a winner to me,see you soon,I mean see you at first place!!!

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, a you tube read aloud....? Yes?...
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:36:00 PM

    what a delightful work for gabriella, gwenie.. kids are smarter than we think... so creatively designed... i don;t like peas per se unless they are mixed and done as hummus.. wowie hugggs with luck!:)

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Professor Onclaud! :)
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 9:18:00 PM

    haha a cute narrative-style poem :) i don't think i'm familiar with the diminished hex averse poem, i'll look into it. thanks for sharing, gwen! hope to read more! =Juli-Michelle=

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great to read your recent work also, Juli!
  1. Date: 6/14/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Oh my Gwendolen! This is too funny! I love this incredible edible write! I do hate peas as well so I can associate with the little fellow! I know you've had experience with something like this as I have! Rebellious little ones! This is a wonderful write my friend as I really enjoyed every comical line you have written! Great Work!!

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 6/14/2012 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gee thanks, Russell...But I DO LOVE PEAS!!!