A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge by Gwendolen R.

Susan Burd

Date: 10/29/2012 7:31:00 AM

great story from the kid's point of view. Shades of Shel Silverstein in there! loved it.

Ruth Courtney

Date: 6/28/2012 7:40:00 PM

cute

Megan O'Day

Date: 6/28/2012 4:39:00 PM

Very cute. :D

nette onclaud

Date: 6/24/2012 9:57:00 PM

one of my fave entries, gwenie... when will you publish children's books?... so playful yet deep in terms of how younsters really express their moods!.. congrats with hugggs!..:)

olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/24/2012 8:58:00 AM

Unique piece from a unique Lady.Great job,Gwen. Congratulations on your win....Ride on,Friend...OXOX...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2012 8:51:00 AM

soupmail.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2012 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/23/2012 3:00:00 AM

Toddlers and their rights? Ha ha ha! But there is nothing funny about eating peas(but don't tell the kids). Nice poem Gwen and congrats on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/22/2012 6:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Gwen my boys hated peas too xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2012 3:30:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

yasmin khan

Date: 6/22/2012 11:47:00 AM

The title is striking too by the way,you come up with fun writes Gweeeen!

yasmin khan

Date: 6/22/2012 11:46:00 AM

Hey Gwendolena,howdy darling,congrads on this win but I did wrack my brains on this one,so again we are in it together!I am eating mangoes not peas and celebrating,its the season of m's but i like m and m's too,I like G too,hahhha silly girlie!g unit!

SCRIBE ML

Date: 6/22/2012 11:41:00 AM

Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2012 11:39:00 AM

RIX~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

David Williams

Date: 6/22/2012 11:15:00 AM

Gwen put that finger food away, loved this, thanks for entering and well done..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2012 8:07:00 AM

Yours was so adorable!! Congrats to you, sweetie!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/17/2012 7:26:00 PM

"Mutiny on the brig" those wonderful small beings with set ideas and strong lungs...sometimes so hard to resist! A fun write, Gwendolen...good luck with the contest! Best wishes, Mikki :) Oh...I had had a poem posted to accompany Joe's, now I will write another! God bless Joe for his patience!

binibining P.iNk

Date: 6/17/2012 2:49:00 AM

This is another witty and fun write from you, Gwen :D-- it sure would be an interesting scene if this were to happen :) enjoy your weekend and love to you :D

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 6/16/2012 5:50:00 PM

How beautiful. Surely a winner in the contest. Thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Lonely. I admire your deep insight.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2012 4:54:00 PM

Great topic that you have chosen..Good job..Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I have enjoyed poetry since I was a child but there have been delays and obstacles along the way to prevent my reading and writing..Sara

jack horne

Date: 6/16/2012 11:48:00 AM

LOL, love this fun piece, Gwendolen. Hope Gabriella had - or has - a great day. Congrats on all your wins : )

kash poet

Date: 6/15/2012 1:32:00 PM

WOW!!Does that K stand for Me?Good suggestion by jaggy (below).

kash poet Date: 6/16/2012 11:19:00 AM

Don't know:( Trainer is needed:)

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 2:00:00 PM

When I revise this version I will add you in at the end...."NOT!" hahahahh....The heat is getting to YOU TOO! You , Jag, and Yasmin need to go swimming!

Pace INK-U-SCRIPT

Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM

lol..love it..brings back memories..good luck in the contest!! hugs

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congrats on your first win this past week too!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2012 8:16:00 AM

hahaha, that was funny, the little K at the end. GOOD way to do the contest, sweetie.

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 11:26:00 AM

It's called revenge poetry.....

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/15/2012 5:31:00 AM

It gladdens me to read this one dealing with a lil something from our daily life..Not everyone could handle such topics as deftly as you have done here, that too after shifting gears so smoothly from lofty things like the holocaust which again is another impossibility for many of the less talented ones.. simply great , Gwen..:) Jag ps: About your creativity going dry, i would suggest you write a love note to someone u like which would help to open up those blocked lines.

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:51:00 AM

The Indian heat wave has attacked your poor brain, Jaggy! hahaha....Thanks for your kindest remarks...

Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT

Date: 6/15/2012 1:43:00 AM

LOL,WONDERFUL POEM!!! I don't think you need winning wishes or luck for this one!!! It reads like a winner to me,see you soon,I mean see you at first place!!!

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:52:00 AM

Hey, a you tube read aloud....? Yes?...

nette onclaud

Date: 6/14/2012 9:36:00 PM

what a delightful work for gabriella, gwenie.. kids are smarter than we think... so creatively designed... i don;t like peas per se unless they are mixed and done as hummus.. wowie hugggs with luck!:)

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:52:00 AM

Thanks Professor Onclaud! :)

Juli- Michelle

Date: 6/14/2012 9:18:00 PM

haha a cute narrative-style poem :) i don't think i'm familiar with the diminished hex averse poem, i'll look into it. thanks for sharing, gwen! hope to read more! =Juli-Michelle=

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:53:00 AM

Great to read your recent work also, Juli!

yasmin khan

Date: 6/14/2012 9:16:00 PM

I love peas too Gwendo!and i love this poem...you really are the mistress of humor really tickled me this one..i have been giggling hysterically after reading this and I have been getting the looks from after members,so let me chow off someplace else..you are the creative little poet that comes up with this fantastic writes....love you for this..oh I better go now..happy birthday Gabby,lucky gal to have a mom like you!

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/15/2012 5:54:00 AM

Gabby read your comment last evening and was chuckling that u knew her bday was several wks ago...Is there nothing that escapes the steel trap of your mind?

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/14/2012 8:52:00 PM

Oh my Gwendolen! This is too funny! I love this incredible edible write! I do hate peas as well so I can associate with the little fellow! I know you've had experience with something like this as I have! Rebellious little ones! This is a wonderful write my friend as I really enjoyed every comical line you have written! Great Work!!

Gwendolen R. Date: 6/14/2012 8:57:00 PM

Gee thanks, Russell...But I DO LOVE PEAS!!!

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