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Severing the attachment, 
Desperate to liberate myself from self imprisonment,

Each Separation ensuing with agony,
Feeling as my own worst enemy,

Further and further I tear,
Seeking the long sought relief but it becomes to much to bear,

Allowing the mold to feel anew, 
Leaving me in a state of subdue,

Almost craving the need to illustrate  some emotion

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:11:00 PM

    The worst enemy we have is our restless mind......nothing hurts so much than low self esteem ..

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:40:00 PM

    TY, a very interesting way to describe self imprisonment. i say go with it... express your emotions.. enjoyed...pd

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Hi Ty great emotion write my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 1:09:00 AM

    I love your last line Ty. Your poem is an illustration of your emotions! Welcome to PS. May you enjoy every verses you share with our wonderful community of poets in soup. Love Dalila

    Price Avatar Ty Price Date: 6/23/2012 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Dalila, im glad you enjoyed reading it. :) and so far i have enjoyed my time on here.
  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:05:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ty. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Price Avatar Ty Price Date: 6/17/2012 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Carol
  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:53:00 AM

    THIS is your way of illustrating emotion, Ty! don't let the insides rip you apart, rip the frustration out into rhyme and poetry! it helps us all... =Juli-Michelle=

    Price Avatar Ty Price Date: 6/13/2012 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, i recently got into poetry and have been using it for just that. displaying my emotions its been pretty awesome.