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Things That Bug Me About You

My goodness, how rude can one get?
I haven’t even finished speaking yet.
Your uncaring interruption,
has ruined my thought construction.
Now I have to put my thoughts on the shelf.
Couldn’t you see I was talking to myself ?!

And when I ask you to look for my keys,
Don’t make me beg on my knees.
I hate it when you laugh to beat the band,
Just because you see them in my hand!

And last week when I asked you to find my phone,
Your unkind remark cut me to the bone.
You said “you are losing your mind I fear.,
What’s that thing on your ear?”

It just isn’t nice, no matter how true it rings,
Accusing me of always losing things!
I just hate that quirk about you!!
Hey,.. you seen my other shoe?

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  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Yin and yang no longer sang and the world, it just stopped spinning. I guess that's what we get with our smirking and our grinning. Nobody get's to live alone forever and a day. There always seems to come the day when someone's in our way. Enjoyed your wonderful wit on this one Robert. Peace.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:51:00 AM

    hehe, uhm I did see your shoe, but it somehow slipped my mind as to where Robert :) gosh I needed your wit today, thanks for that! love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Good morning Robert, stopping by to greet you with a happy fathers day... About your poem...lol..I could not help but, laugh with the ending... take care~pd

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Ha ha, Robert, we think alike about the stage we are going through. Sadly it just gets worse but I ain't giving up. I will never "go quietly into the night", people will sit up and take notice when I'm making my exit! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 6:07:00 AM

    ha ha. love the humor in this and the reality of it. quite a character!