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As ocean tides cascade from Amphitrite’s dewed breast with ripples of fine air in moans… she gushes out along white crest, the trail of love, passion, and faith. Searching tenderness that fondles heaved waves to soak every curve moist with finesse… she dives in rhapsody. Hymns cuddling sea across bright lune, her flesh of tones quenching dried hearts. She bestows on mankind life’s essence Primal… like raw night
© ~ Amphitrite—Greek Goddess of the sea by nette onclaud especially for David William's True Diminishing Hexaverse

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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot nette a very sensuous write ss

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:37:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Nette~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:06:00 AM
    Nette, great imagery you portrayed, I could almost hear the waves, thanks for entering and well done..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Love the allusion to Goddess of the sea and imagery of night, nette. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Nette!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:51:00 AM
    Congrats, nette,on the win, love this fine write..:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 6:52:00 AM
    Truly beauty of a write. This is sure to be way up the top in the contest, Nette. Good luck to you..

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:41:00 AM
    With striking images this makes for an awesome read..thnx for the comments, hugs, ..:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:07:00 PM
    just love this beauty, Nette

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Beautifully written Nette..love this piece!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Wow!!This is amazing Nette.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:10:00 AM
    Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.I do enjoy a trip to the ocean front just to enjoy the sights and sounds of the water and surroundings..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I was inspired by the morning and by a song that is in the group of new songs we are learning to sing on the Sunday around the fourth of July..Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Bravo!! Splendid D.H., Nette! The first stanza blows my mind! Best of luck in David's Contest...you dont need it! A sure winner! Congratulations in advance! : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:00:00 AM
    A new gold pearl from your hands Nette, beautiful written - Love it, thank you. - oxox huggggs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:53:00 AM
    Wow, Nette, you have created another masterpiece! What a fabulous and ingenious write! I love the sea and you have brought life and breath into each wave! Bring on the rhapsody my friend! Wonderful write! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
    The title alone says come read me. The wording, and presentation is beautiful. Euphoric imagery!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:14:00 AM
    ..."She Sounds Sooo Beautiful, Sooo Full Of Love, My Dear Precious, Beautiful & Gifted Nette * Again, I Find The Exeptional Quality & Amazing Body Of Your Beauties Splendid Verse ... I Will Favour This Wonderful Piece In Beautiful Poetic Art; Just as I Do You ... 'Luv,'" Tristen :)

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