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MYSTIC BEAUTY

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Below is the poem entitled MYSTIC BEAUTY which was written by poet Melanie Tan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MYSTIC BEAUTY

oh the music of your tune,
Makes everything so immune,
Even it's a silence code,
Yet it's your best antidote.

You make the rainbow sings,
With every move you swings,
Could you be so that beautiful,
With hymns and beams so bountiful.

The bubbles of air you've made,
Determine your happiness in fate,
For your passionate is in the air,
Make one's serenity clear and dear.

The magnificent flows you've shown,
Took everyone's precious breath away,
Colorful enigma that looks beyond,  
Shows your loves never betray.

Thousands of charisma you've run,
Reminds us life's meaning and the fun ,
Your mystic beauty just like the sun,
Always treasured even it's gone.

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:31:00 AM
    I enjoy reading this poem. It's beautiful. I intend to analyze this poem as one of my report in my literature class. Can you please give me a brief background about yourself, so that I can introduce you to my classmate.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:47:00 PM
    ..."You Make Me Smile With Your Sweeet Beautiful Voice, My Dear Precious Beautiful Melanie Tan *.* You Are Very Beautiful, As Is This Beautiful Poem ... But, The Beauty I Find Amid These Lines Transcends All Things Physical ... Sooo, 'Stay Beautiful Beautiful Girl, Luv,''' Tristen :)

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/20/2012 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Tristen..Thank you for your compliment and dropping by..xoxo
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:36:00 AM
    Beautiful!Congrats on your featured poem.To see your Avatar I had to tilt my head towards left almost 90 degree:)

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/20/2012 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash!,,,Hope you didn't hurt your neck ,,,hehe
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Melanie. Love, Carol

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning from Malaysia!Thank you Carol!
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Very nice write here!!

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,Pace,,,,
  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:33:00 PM
    Welcome to PS. Your peom has some good images, I enjoyed reading this tonight.

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/12/2012 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoy it Joann..Cheers!
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:39:00 AM
    beautiful,like it Melanie,welcome to the Soup

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/11/2012 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,Richard..more to learn thou..i am just a beginner for this,,( ^,^ )